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Issue No:8<br />

The Lyric <strong>Write</strong>rs <strong>Magazine</strong><br />

The Queen Of Rock<br />

Freddie Mercury<br />

REGULAR FEATURES<br />

Introducing - Bill Halloran<br />

Lyrical Do Not - Daryn Wright<br />

Song Lyrics - Trevor Dimoff<br />

Lyricslinger - Simon Wright<br />

The Lyrics Doctor<br />

Vocal Coach - Paul Sykes<br />

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In This Issue...<br />

Paul<br />

deMarco<br />

Pages 20 - 23<br />

Featuring<br />

16 Dennis A Westgate<br />

18 Paul deMarco<br />

20 Freddie Mercury<br />

22 Freddie Mercury<br />

24 Shawn Adam Williams<br />

26 Kerri Layton<br />

28 Kevin Gullickson<br />

30 The Village<br />

32 Colin B Leonard<br />

34 Nick Cody<br />

36 Dina Andrews<br />

Regulars<br />

04 The Lyrics Doctor<br />

06 Daryn Wright<br />

08 Trevor Dimoff<br />

10 Paul Sykes<br />

12 Bill O’Halloran<br />

14 Simon Wright<br />

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T jÉÜw YÜÉÅ g{x Xw|àÉÜAAA<br />

Another month has flown past, and here I am again with a new<br />

group of talented songwriters showcasing their skills to the world.<br />

It always gives me great pleasure to work on every single article,<br />

and I try to remain sensitive to the theme as I fit the articles to the<br />

pages.<br />

This month I’ve touched upon Freddie Mercury’s career, who was<br />

perhaps the greatest frontman ever to perform upon the musical<br />

stage. He enjoyed huge success in his short musical career, and<br />

more posthumously. He’ll live forever in my own mind as one of the<br />

worlds greatest ever performers. A pure genius, who knew exactly<br />

how to work an audience.<br />

Please may I request you take a look at the links on each article to<br />

find out more about the artists who contribute, and please follow the<br />

link to listen to the featured song when lyrics are displayed.<br />

If you’d like to appear in a future issue why not send me an email<br />

and I’ll do my level best to fit you into a future issue.<br />

jane@writeawaymagazine.co.uk<br />

Likewise, I’m always open to offers for regular writers to<br />

contribute articles on lyric/songwriting. Every idea will be seriously<br />

considered for inclusion. I’d dearly love to find a<br />

regular writer on Home Recording. If this is you, please get in<br />

touch. So many avenues to take this magazine...<br />

Please forward to me any lyric related questions that you may have<br />

via e-mail and I’ll pass them on to our Lyrics Doctor to answer in a<br />

future issue. Don’t be shy, this magazine is here to help lyricists of<br />

all levels to improve their skills and find inspiration for future lyrics.<br />

If you have a skill, service or craft related to songwriting and would<br />

like an affordable advertising platform please drop me an email to<br />

discuss.<br />

Jane xxx<br />

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The Lyri<br />

Jane Shields from<br />

Worcester, England, asks<br />

how a lyricist with limited<br />

musical knowledge might<br />

estimate the number of<br />

verses and choruses needed<br />

for a three-minute pop<br />

song. Similarly, Peter<br />

Dalton from Canberra,<br />

Australia, asks how a lyricist<br />

can know how long a<br />

song will be. The classic<br />

pop formula is two or three<br />

verse/chorus pairs and perhaps<br />

a bridge. You’ll usually<br />

have four or six or eight<br />

lines for each verse, a chorus<br />

that’s either half as<br />

long or the same length as<br />

the verse, and a bridge of<br />

about the same length as<br />

the verse. Of course, this<br />

can vary dramatically<br />

depending on the tempo<br />

and myriad other factors,<br />

but most of my songs that<br />

follow that recipe come in<br />

between two and four minutes.<br />

One way to check is<br />

to find another artist’s tune<br />

that has roughly the same<br />

beat you envision for your<br />

composition. Try singing or<br />

chanting your lyrics over<br />

the structure. If it fits into,<br />

say, Honky Tonk Woman or<br />

Respect or Proud Mary, it’ll<br />

probably come in at about<br />

three minutes.<br />

Sharon Messa from<br />

Glasgow asks whether it’s<br />

OK to change the words in<br />

a pre-chorus. The flippant<br />

answer would be, “Of<br />

course. You can do what<br />

you want. It’s your song!”<br />

But more seriously, there’s<br />

a reason song structures<br />

have developed the way<br />

they have, and repetition of<br />

the chorus (and I tend to<br />

consider the pre-chorus to<br />

be part of the chorus)<br />

helps make a song catchy<br />

and memorable. That said,<br />

songwriters do sometimes<br />

change parts of the chorus.<br />

In Alternative Facts, I tweak<br />

both the pre-chorus and the<br />

chorus. The first pre-chorus<br />

begins with the lines,<br />

“Here’s alternative fact<br />

Number One/What we had<br />

is really done.” Then the<br />

second and third pre-choruses<br />

(logically enough)<br />

become alternative fact<br />

Number Two and Number<br />

Three, with corresponding<br />

rhymes. The chorus itself<br />

also shifts, with the first<br />

instance starting “An alternate<br />

truth you know it ain’t<br />

right/Light is black and<br />

dark is white/We ain’t broken<br />

only cracked/To say<br />

we’re through is alternative<br />

fact.” In the next instance,<br />

the third line becomes<br />

“We’re unglued but still<br />

intact,” and the final time<br />

it’s “We should add but you<br />

subtract.” Of course, part<br />

of the conceit of the song<br />

is the litany of alternative<br />

facts one, two, and three,<br />

so the pre-chorus had to<br />

change (and in that respect<br />

it might be considered part<br />

of the verse). For the chorus<br />

itself, I could have used<br />

just one of the variations I<br />

chose, but I think there’s<br />

enough memorable repetition<br />

to allow for replacing<br />

the third line, which to my<br />

ear makes the song more<br />

interesting.<br />

Since I received your question,<br />

I’ve been looking<br />

around for hit songs that<br />

change out part of the chorus,<br />

and it’s not easy to find<br />

them. (I’d welcome any<br />

other examples readers<br />

manage to unearth.) The<br />

Beatles make small tweaks<br />

to Day Tripper, In My Life, I<br />

Feel Fine, and several others.<br />

The Rolling Stones do<br />

it in Wild Horses and Dead<br />

Flowers, as does<br />

Springsteen in Brilliant<br />

Disguise. In Life During<br />

Wartime, Talking Heads<br />

switch out the third line of<br />

every instance of the chorus.<br />

Each one begins, “This<br />

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cs Doctor<br />

ain't no party, this ain't no<br />

disco/This ain't no fooling<br />

around” and ends “I ain’t got<br />

time for that now.” But the third<br />

line shifts from “No time for<br />

dancing, or lovey dovey,” to the<br />

deliciously evocative (for those<br />

who knew New York in the ‘80s)<br />

“This ain't no Mudd Club, or<br />

C.B.G.B.,” and then to “I'd like to<br />

hold you, I'd love to kiss you.”<br />

Before the final instance, there<br />

are four lines that follow the<br />

chords and melody of the chorus<br />

but have entirely different<br />

lyrics—therefore serving almost<br />

as a bridge, which the song otherwise<br />

lacks. In other words, it’s<br />

always good to be aware of the<br />

rules and it’s generally best to<br />

follow them. But when it makes<br />

sense to you, go ahead and<br />

change the pre-chorus or the<br />

chorus--because you can do<br />

what you want. It’s your song!<br />

Happy SongwR x iting<br />

The Lyrics Doctor<br />

www.thegincident.com<br />

Note from the editor...<br />

If you have a lyrics-related<br />

question you’d like answered<br />

please e-mail it to me and I’ll<br />

forward it on to<br />

The Lyrics Doctor.<br />

jane@writeawaymagazine.co.uk<br />

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Daryn Wright<br />

Do Not Series<br />

Hitting The Snooze Button<br />

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too much. This<br />

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avoid it? We can<br />

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or everyone. You<br />

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, so we will talk<br />

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, are masters of crewe<br />

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and turn<br />

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best chance at<br />

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we can encourage<br />

wonder freely, or to<br />

pecific path you<br />

efore you sleep.<br />

happen in the REM<br />

ovement) portion of<br />

your sleep, which is a deep<br />

sleep state consisting on the<br />

average of about 20% of your<br />

sleep time. Although it is difficult<br />

to remember an entire<br />

dream, it is not uncommon to<br />

remember the last 10 minutes of<br />

your dream. You may be one of<br />

the unlucky few who have difficulties<br />

remembering any portion<br />

of the dream. There may be an<br />

underlying reason why you can’t<br />

remember.<br />

Anxiety, stress, medication,<br />

health issues, and other similar<br />

factors can hinder your ability to<br />

recall a dream. In some cases,<br />

it is the opposite. Determining<br />

which one helps you or hinders<br />

you may be worth investigating.<br />

It is true some people naturally<br />

remember their dreams in vivid<br />

details from beginning to end.<br />

Those who have the most creativity<br />

seem to remember more<br />

than those who are not as creative.<br />

Daily creative exercises<br />

can help over time.<br />

When is the best time to remember<br />

what your dream was<br />

about? The best time to remember<br />

your dream is within the first<br />

90 seconds after waking up.<br />

Making a habit of writing down<br />

your thoughts and dreams within<br />

the first 10 minutes of waking<br />

can give you ample opportunity<br />

to capture your minds masterpiece<br />

dreams. When you are<br />

writing during this time, it is<br />

important to get it all down.<br />

Don’t worry about rhymes,<br />

rhythm, patterns, or any other<br />

detail that may get between you<br />

and the paper.<br />

We can induce our dreams by<br />

thinking about a specific story,<br />

scenario, lyric, or whatever it is<br />

you are working on, and keeping<br />

it in your thoughts while you<br />

drift off to sleep.<br />

You may miss out on this creative<br />

atmosphere by drifting<br />

back to sleep. Do not cheat<br />

yourself by hitting the snooze<br />

button.<br />

Written by Daryn Wright<br />

www.darynwright.com<br />

www.reverbnation.com/darynwri<br />

ght<br />

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HOW YOUR LYRICS BECO<br />

The Steps To Take A Song Lyric To<br />

Recorded Song<br />

You’ve finished the lyrics to your song. If you<br />

don’t know how to write the music, your next<br />

step is to find a co-writer who can write the<br />

music for your song.<br />

Finding A Co-writing Partner<br />

As with any relationship, it can take time and<br />

effort to find a co-writing partner who is a<br />

good fit. You’re looking for someone with skills<br />

and experience that complements your skill<br />

set. Also consider their dependability, their<br />

communication skills and compatible musical<br />

goals.<br />

For example, if you want to write lyrics for<br />

songs that could be commercially released<br />

and your co-writer is able to write the music<br />

but can’t record it to a high standard you will<br />

find yourself frustrated unless you can also<br />

find someone to record and perform it.<br />

Clear communication will lead to a better relationship<br />

and stronger songs.<br />

So you better understand what to look for in a<br />

co-writing partner, here are the steps that your<br />

co-writer needs to complete to take your lyrics<br />

and create a recording of your finished song…<br />

Finalize the Lyrics<br />

Approve/edit the lyrics, changes to improve the<br />

lyrics might be suggested. Be open to suggestions<br />

from your co-writer, their goal is the<br />

same as yours, to create the best song possible.<br />

You both need to agree on the final version<br />

of the lyrics and the final song structure<br />

before moving on to recording the song (for<br />

more about writing a complete song lyric read:<br />

How To <strong>Write</strong> A Finished Song Lyric,?)<br />

<strong>Write</strong> <strong>Away</strong>, p8, June 2019<br />

<strong>Write</strong> the Music:<br />

Melody, choosing the notes a vocalist sings for<br />

the lyrics in each song section.<br />

Chord Progression, the chords for each song<br />

section (chorus, verse, pre-chorus, bridge).<br />

Arrangement, the way an instrumentalist plays<br />

during each song section.<br />

This might be a:<br />

Basic Arrangement - voice and one instrument<br />

Band Arrangement - voice, guitar, piano, bass,<br />

drums<br />

Electronic Arrangement - voice, loops and<br />

beats, synthesizers and drum machines<br />

Recording The Song<br />

(From simple to more complex)<br />

Work Tape - rough audio recording.<br />

Often a work tape is used to communicate<br />

between co-writers while the song is being<br />

written (sent to you for feedback while the<br />

song is in progress) or to create a rough<br />

recording of a finished song. This can be as<br />

simple as an audio performance recorded on a<br />

smartphone.<br />

Video Performance of the Song,<br />

Co-writer singing and playing the song on<br />

video, suitable to release on social media or as<br />

a demo recording. Some video and audio editing<br />

is often required.<br />

Home Studio Recording<br />

Typically several instruments played one at a<br />

time, then mixed together. Sometimes a professional<br />

mixer or mastering engineer is hired<br />

to improve the quality of the final version.<br />

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ME A RECORDED SONG<br />

Trevor Dimoff<br />

Professional Studio Recording<br />

The advantage to a professional studio is the<br />

quality of the final recording. It’s difficult to<br />

create a commercial quality recording without<br />

a professional studio recording or professional<br />

mixing and mastering.<br />

The disadvantage is price... costs include: studio<br />

time, a recording engineer (who records<br />

the song), a mixing engineer (who mixes all<br />

tracks together) and mastering engineer (who<br />

puts finishing touches on the final mix to make<br />

it ready for radio). In addition, it’s common to<br />

hire professional studio musicians who play<br />

and sing the parts on the recording.<br />

Your Next Step<br />

Think about your songwriting goals and your<br />

lyric writing skills. What can you offer to a<br />

potential co-writer?<br />

What skills do you need in a co-writing partner?<br />

What are your goals for your songs?<br />

Now it’s time to start actively looking for cowriters<br />

to work with….<br />

If you are learning how to write the music for<br />

your songs, you can find out more about the<br />

necessary skills and ways to learn them here:<br />

https://epicsongwriting.com/start-writingsongs/<br />

Trevor Dimoff is a songwriter and songwriting<br />

teacher at:<br />

https://epicsongwriting.com/<br />

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Freddie Mercury<br />

In a world where everything<br />

appears to becoming cheaper<br />

yet more disposable, I often<br />

wonder if the great pop artists of<br />

the 70's ever fully realised the<br />

longevity of their recordings. I<br />

wonder what Freddie mercury<br />

was thinking when he was in<br />

front of a studio mic laying down<br />

vocal takes that to this day, nearly<br />

50 years later are still played<br />

on high rotation around the<br />

world. I wonder if the raw emotion<br />

he exuded when he performed<br />

with Queen was a product<br />

of that understanding or<br />

whether he was just Freddie<br />

being Freddie. I personally think<br />

the latter. A true, genuine vocal<br />

artist capable of writing songs<br />

and creating performances that<br />

transcended normality into<br />

something truly breathtaking.<br />

So what makes Freddies performances<br />

so breathtaking?<br />

Today we break down three<br />

important attributes that I<br />

believe sets Freddie apart from<br />

all but the most elite of vocal<br />

stars.<br />

Firstly risk. With creativity comes<br />

risk. The more creative away<br />

from the known, the more risky.<br />

Freddies songs were very risky.<br />

The 70's were an interesting<br />

decade. Bouncing off the shoulders<br />

of the early studios from<br />

the 50's and the 60's, studios<br />

were now coming of age with<br />

large format consoles and 2" 24<br />

track tape machines. The record<br />

labels had unfathomable income<br />

because the only way to consume<br />

music is to buy it either on<br />

tape or record or listen on radio<br />

for which they still received royalties.<br />

Just like the movie industry,<br />

if a label saw massive potential,<br />

they could risk massive<br />

financial investment into them.<br />

Enter the supergroups.. Names<br />

like Fleetwood Mac, Pink Floyd,<br />

the Eagles and of course Queen<br />

emerged where they could<br />

spend a million dollars on 8<br />

songs.<br />

This combination of huge budgets<br />

and unbridled high quality<br />

studio tech allowed for both the<br />

labels and the artists to be very<br />

very creative. With this creativity<br />

comes an enormous risk. But<br />

with this risk comes a roll of the<br />

dice to virtual immortal greatness.<br />

Freddie mercury was hugely<br />

risky. It's easy to look back<br />

and assume that Bohemian<br />

Rhapsody always existed but<br />

remember, at some point, it<br />

began as a blank piece of paper<br />

on which Freddie wrote "scaramouche<br />

scaramouche... Thunder<br />

bolts of lightening". I can only<br />

imagine what a few suits at the<br />

label thought the first time they<br />

heard THAT idea.<br />

This leads me onto Freddies second<br />

unique trait...<br />

He appeared completely fearless.<br />

It takes a VERY confident<br />

person to write the songs he did<br />

and pitch them as the next greatest<br />

thing. Freddie is the ultimate<br />

expression of not giving one fk<br />

about what other people think<br />

about him. He was already openly<br />

gay in a decade when talking<br />

about "poofter bashing" was<br />

almost still acceptible. Maybe his<br />

resilience in his personal life<br />

made him resilient in his professional<br />

one to the point that he<br />

could swing way out where the<br />

average person on the street<br />

would be completely consumed<br />

with the opinions of others.<br />

And this leads me onto his third<br />

trait... Dynamics.<br />

His combination of being hyper<br />

creative and completely fearless<br />

allows him to go where very few<br />

singers can.... Into the world of<br />

absolute vulnerability. Freddie<br />

didn't just sing. He expressed<br />

emotion in a way few can. When<br />

you listen to his recordings,<br />

you'll hear up to three or four different<br />

emotions on each and<br />

every line. He has an intuition to<br />

move from whisper to full belt.<br />

His soft notes are gloriously soft<br />

then instantly he opens up into<br />

bright, hard twang then into<br />

what appears to be Opera then<br />

back to belting. And this degree<br />

of expression within all of his<br />

vocal lines are one huge component<br />

to his unique brilliance.<br />

Go to YouTube and search for<br />

Freddie mercury isolated vocal.<br />

Then listen. You'll hear it.<br />

This month, consider upping<br />

your risk by being super creative,<br />

completely fearless and<br />

expressive in your performances<br />

like never before and who<br />

knows, these may be the very<br />

attributes that launch you from<br />

your current plataeu into a whole<br />

new vocal realm.<br />

instagram.com/vocalpro.com.au<br />

http://vocalprocourses.com/<br />

http//www.facebook.com/vocalpro.com.au<br />

Paul Sykes, Vocal Coach<br />

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Paul Sykes<br />

Freddie Mercury performs in 1980.<br />

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Songs Are Perform<br />

If the bard of Avon<br />

himself (William<br />

Shakespeare to you)<br />

was not above tailoring<br />

his works to play to the<br />

strengths of his best<br />

available actors, should<br />

we as songwriters be<br />

doing the same? After<br />

all, songs are intended to<br />

be performed, right?<br />

Are we giving our performer<br />

(perhaps ourselves?)<br />

something they<br />

can work with? Is it too<br />

far outside their comfort<br />

zone? Or worse yet, too<br />

far inside that well-worn<br />

path? Fundamental truth<br />

number one: songwriting…..in<br />

fact, all art,<br />

needs to evoke in its<br />

audience both a feeling<br />

of surprise, and one of<br />

familiarity. Their reaction<br />

should be “Wow, I<br />

never thought about it<br />

that way!” rather than<br />

“What the hell are you<br />

talking about?” (Having<br />

said that, it seems like<br />

the best art often starts<br />

them feeling the latter…<br />

..and gently leads them<br />

to the former, almost as<br />

if they have come to the<br />

logical conclusion on<br />

their own).<br />

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Bill Halloran<br />

ances...... Right?<br />

One could argue then<br />

that the bard is all wet.<br />

If we are inspired, in a<br />

flash of insight, to innermost<br />

thoughts and feelings<br />

that are at once<br />

unique and yet so brilliantly<br />

logical that we<br />

can’t wait to share them<br />

with our fellow humans…<br />

.is it REALLY going to<br />

matter much whether our<br />

singer finds them as<br />

comfortable as an old<br />

shoe? Shouldn’t our<br />

goal be for this lightning<br />

strike of clarity to stand<br />

on its own, regardless of<br />

who is singing it? Why<br />

would we tinker with<br />

transparency? It almost<br />

seems like cheapening it,<br />

like we’ve dragged in a<br />

new, irrelevant character<br />

just so her name will<br />

rhyme (“little sister Nell”<br />

in “Color Him Father” by<br />

the Winstons...a songwriting<br />

mess so bad that<br />

even having someone die<br />

in the song to drum up<br />

sympathy can’t save it…<br />

but I digress).<br />

The truth is somewhere<br />

in between. As it often<br />

is. First of all, let’s calm<br />

down, and consider<br />

whether we’ve just written<br />

“War and Peace”....<br />

or “Wooly Bully”. Then,<br />

while striving for this<br />

perfect clarity, let’s also<br />

strive for simplicity<br />

(something this author<br />

may occasionally forget!)<br />

What words, sections,<br />

notes can we trim? What<br />

lines are least essential<br />

to our message. If we’re<br />

not sure our singer can<br />

deliver this line with conviction<br />

(warning bells<br />

should go off, if you find<br />

yourself wondering<br />

“Would ANY singer feel<br />

good with this?”) go back<br />

and decide if that line<br />

can come out.<br />

Bottom line: If we can<br />

lead them to whatever<br />

beauty, truth and fun<br />

without them seeing us<br />

pulling the strings…<br />

thinking they’ve gotten<br />

there on their own… then<br />

we’ve created the magic<br />

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Mercury<br />

(Intro)<br />

Have you ever felt like you're going<br />

to fall?<br />

I felt like I should fly<br />

(Verse 1)<br />

I put on my spacesuit<br />

Said goodbye to my loved ones<br />

I guess I'll be on the news<br />

But it won't matter anyway<br />

(Chorus)<br />

Got a little close to the sun today<br />

Mercury's rising<br />

Mercury's rising,<br />

Got a little close to the sun today<br />

Mercury's rising<br />

Mercury's rising<br />

(Verse 2)<br />

I climbed in my spaceship<br />

And battened the hatches<br />

I took this bird for a spin<br />

But it won't matter anyway<br />

(Corus)<br />

Got a little close to the sun today<br />

Mercury's rising<br />

Mercury's rising,<br />

Got a little close to the sun today<br />

Mercury's rising<br />

Mercury's rising<br />

(Bridge)<br />

I can see the light<br />

Or is it the fire?<br />

I guess I'll find out soon enough,<br />

Climbing higher and higher<br />

The air getting lighter<br />

As blackness begins to engulf<br />

(Verse 3)<br />

I went for a spacewalk<br />

And I was not tethered<br />

Didn't intend to return<br />

Cos it won't matter anyway<br />

(Chorus)<br />

Got a little close to the sun today<br />

Mercury's rising<br />

Mercury's rising,<br />

Got a little close to the sun today<br />

Mercury's rising<br />

Mercury's rising<br />

(Outro)<br />

Crash landed<br />

Smashed in a wall<br />

Tried to fly<br />

I was destined to fall<br />

Written by Simon Wright<br />

(June 2019)<br />

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Simon Wright<br />

’s Rising<br />

Mercury’s Rising – A Simon<br />

Wright Lyric<br />

This lyric has got nothing to do with<br />

Freddie Mercury. The theme of the lyric<br />

would possibly be very different, given<br />

the title, if it was! Mercury’s Rising was<br />

influenced in a way though by another<br />

legendary rock vocalist, the late great<br />

Chris Cornell. I’d been listening to<br />

Cornell’s catalogue of songs on Spotify<br />

and, stylistically, it’s influenced this lyric.<br />

It’s his voice that I heard in my head as I<br />

was penning it.<br />

About the lyric<br />

At the moment this is just a lyric. I’d love<br />

to get it turned into a song. If any musicians<br />

out there would like to collaborate<br />

then please get in touch with me.<br />

About Simon Wright<br />

Simon is an Irish lyric writer who lives in<br />

Scotland. He collaborates with musicians<br />

across the world to turn his lyrics into<br />

songs. Check out his website:<br />

www.LyricSlinger.co.uk<br />

and follow<br />

@TheLyricSlinger on Twitter<br />

As I was listening to Chris Cornell’s<br />

songs I experienced a mix of emotions;<br />

the pleasure of hearing his beautiful<br />

voice and music, and the melancholy of<br />

knowing that he chose to take his own<br />

life. Despite all that talent he had a<br />

moment where the weight of the world,<br />

the gravity, became too much to take.<br />

I was also influenced by remembering<br />

someone from many years ago who<br />

crashed his car into a wall as a consequence<br />

of the depression that a marriage<br />

breakup caused. Thankfully he survived<br />

and has begun to rebuild his life, bit by<br />

bit.<br />

So. quite a heavy topic for a lyric. but I<br />

can see the chorus being quite memorable<br />

accompanied by a rock riff. And I<br />

like the story that I’ve built in the verses<br />

and bridge, with the astronaut metaphor.<br />

I’m looking for musicians to turn this into<br />

a song.<br />

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What’s In<br />

WHAT’S IN A LYRIC!<br />

You may as well ask “How long is a piece of<br />

string?” or “How do you describe ‘colour’ to<br />

a blindperson?” Because in my own estimation,<br />

there is no definitive answer, except to say<br />

“<strong>Write</strong> it the way you feel it!” I suppose that’s how<br />

it begins for most poets and lyricists.<br />

So what makes a good lyric? Like a chef preparing<br />

a gourmet meal, it all depends on the constituents<br />

(in my case the words) and how they’re<br />

assembled. Just like the art of cuisine, practice<br />

makes perfect and once you learn the basics, you<br />

can diversify and experiment to your heart’s content.<br />

Over the years, I’ve developed my own technique<br />

for writing song lyrics as well as composing<br />

the music, which for me is a blessing in disguise<br />

because I can meld both words and<br />

music into acomplete experience.<br />

Although lyric writing can be free and fluent, in<br />

which the song is built from an idea; a particular<br />

experience or sometimes a political expression,<br />

when it comes to writing for musical theatre, there<br />

is also another discipline which must be learned,<br />

‘characterisation.’ Many of the most successful<br />

musicals are based on plays, novels or motion pictures<br />

i.e. Shakespeare’s Romeo & Juliet became<br />

‘West SideStory’, Shaw’s Pygmalion turned into<br />

‘My Fair Lady’, Molnar’s Lilliom becam ‘Carousel’,<br />

Gaston Leroux’s famous novel was scored into<br />

‘Phantom of the Opera’, and Victor Hugo’s ‘Les<br />

Miserables’ etc. In the majority of cases the leading<br />

roles are played by great singers, supported in<br />

turn by a large chorus, which in turn calls for<br />

great musical numbers. The songs in these musicals<br />

are generally performed by many (or few)<br />

characters, as solo/duet presentations, or a group<br />

and in a variety of disciplines; to portray grief,<br />

love, happiness, fun, sarcasm or any other way<br />

that communicates emotion.<br />

If you are serious in pursuing a songwriting<br />

career may I suggest you get hold of a book entitled<br />

‘<br />

Song by Song, published 1984 by Ross Anderson,<br />

also buy a copy of Roget’s Thesaurus (my bible)<br />

when you’re looking for alternative words to<br />

express a particular feeling or emotion.<br />

As for lyric writing, ‘Stage Musicals’ are the path I<br />

have followed for the many hundreds of songs<br />

I’ve composed over the years and in way of explanation,<br />

here is a brief synopsis of how I developed<br />

the song lyric for the Lewis Caroll’s character<br />

‘Alice’ in new version of ‘Alice in Wonderland’.<br />

NOTES:<br />

1) As the story tells, Alice is sat under a tree reading<br />

a book, when suddenly a white rabbit hurries<br />

by. The story develops from this moment.<br />

2) When she arrives in Wonderland her first<br />

thoughts are “Who in the world am I?<br />

3) The song needs to pursue this idea i.e Is this all<br />

in her mind or is she daydreaming? Are all of<br />

these characters just a figment of her imagination.<br />

4) Could it be that there are two Alices and if so,<br />

which is the real one? “Am I just plain little Alice,<br />

or am I Alice in Wonderland?” Use this as the<br />

closing line in each verse.<br />

5) The opening line could be “Is this all in my<br />

imagination?”<br />

2nd line “xxxxxxxx”<br />

3rd line “Could this be some wild hallucination?<br />

4th line “xxxxxxxxxxxxx”<br />

5th line “Is all this world created in my head?”<br />

6th line “Am I only dreaming and soundly sleeping<br />

in my bed?<br />

(etc to the closing phrase)<br />

Lines 7&8 “Am I just Alice, plain little Alice, or am<br />

I Alice in Wonderland?”<br />

This is the basic format for this song. The completed<br />

work took me a few more days (& nights)<br />

(Sung by Alice)<br />

ALICE IN WONDERLAND<br />

Is it all in my imagination<br />

Am I playing part of someone else<br />

Could this be some wild hallucination<br />

Of how I want to see myself<br />

Is all this world created in my head<br />

Am I awake, or soundly sleeping in my bed<br />

Will I ever really understand<br />

Am I just Alice, plain little Alice<br />

Or am I Alice in Wonderland<br />

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A Lyric?<br />

* Could there be a simple explanation<br />

For these pictures playing with my mind<br />

Maybe they are all my own creation<br />

From childhood days I’ve left behind<br />

Would it be wrong to live inside my dream<br />

A private place where every cat would have it’s<br />

cream<br />

Where I’d never care, or understand<br />

If I were Alice, plain littleAlice<br />

Or I were Alice in Wonderland<br />

* Sometimes when I’m feeling sentimental<br />

I’ll imagine there’s another me<br />

And my mind can be experimental<br />

On who I’d really like to be<br />

If I could choose from other times gone by<br />

Perhaps I’d find there was no one as good as I<br />

Maybe then I’d come to understand<br />

Although I’m Alice, plain little Alice<br />

I’m really Alice in Wonderland<br />

© ALICE IN WONDERLAND<br />

(ONE OF 9 ORIGINAL SONGS IN THIS PRODUC-<br />

TION)<br />

Links to Tyne Music productions:<br />

https://tynemusic.com/original-sheet-music-andmusic-albums<br />

https://www.facebook.com/tynesider<br />

https://www.facebook.com/dennis.a.westgate<br />

DENNIS A. WESTGATE<br />

Note: The original song only consisted of one<br />

verse. After the 2014 production I decided to add<br />

another two verses to make it more commercial<br />

for solo presentation<br />

Links to Tyne Music productions:<br />

(This is the completed version as performed by<br />

the ‘We Are Theatre’ company in the Joseph<br />

Rowntree Theatre - York n 2013, the Spa Theatre -<br />

Bridlington 2014 and returned by popular request<br />

to the Rowntree Theatre - York in 2018)<br />

.<br />

http://www.wearetheatre.co.uk/alice-in-wonderland.html<br />

https://tynemusic.com/original-sheet-music-andmusic-albums<br />

https://www.facebook.com/tynesider<br />

https://www.facebook.com/dennis.a.westgate<br />

LINK TO DENNIS’S MUSIC:<br />

https://sellfy.com/tyneonlinemusic<br />

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Put Your Heart<br />

Do you write from an idea?<br />

Do you write from a title?<br />

Or do you just write what you<br />

feel?<br />

You can do all three... You can<br />

write what you feel about an<br />

idea from a title... And so<br />

many hit songs have been<br />

written like that... But ask<br />

yourself... The ones that hit<br />

you in the heart, how where<br />

they written?<br />

Usually it was someone who<br />

sat down with pen and paper<br />

and maybe a guitar or piano<br />

and the ‘Words’ came to<br />

them... Sure maybe they<br />

tweaked it afterwards... Or<br />

maybe a co-writer looking<br />

from another angle saw a way<br />

to make it "better"... But the<br />

essence of the song that hits<br />

someone's heart is what<br />

makes it powerful .. and what<br />

is that? It's what YOUR heart<br />

wrote...<br />

Most writers will tell you their<br />

best songs came together in<br />

the shortest time... Yes most if<br />

not all songs need crafting to<br />

reach their potential... But if<br />

you can just let go and let the<br />

song write itself and just get<br />

out the way of the song then<br />

your heart can shine<br />

through...<br />

Freddie was right, he was<br />

always honest and true and<br />

because of that anyone could<br />

feel what he wrote and find<br />

something of themselves in<br />

there too... And like he says,<br />

"if you see it , it's there" why?<br />

Because it's the heart you are<br />

seeing, regardless of the<br />

meaning it's the feeling that<br />

you are translating...<br />

So... Make sure that while you<br />

agonise over the words you<br />

choose and the melodies you<br />

write in your song craft, prioritise<br />

the heart and the emotion...<br />

Remember, you rarely remember<br />

everything someone<br />

does... and often forget what<br />

they say... But... You always<br />

remember how they make you<br />

feel.<br />

Keep writing, stay creative<br />

and always give your heart...<br />

It's the only one in the world<br />

quite like it<br />

Paul deMarco is a UK based<br />

Singer, Songwriter and<br />

Producer<br />

You can find out more from<br />

www.pauldemarcomusic.com<br />

and get a free download of his<br />

latest single "Chasing Your<br />

Ghost"<br />

Find him on Facebook at<br />

www.facebook.com/pauldema<br />

rcomusic<br />

And join the group<br />

Songwriting, Recording and<br />

Production with Paul deMarco<br />

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F M<br />

R E<br />

E R<br />

D C<br />

D U<br />

I R<br />

E Y<br />

Barcelona<br />

I had this perfect dream<br />

Un sueno me envolvio<br />

This dream was me and you<br />

Tal vez esta aqui<br />

I want all the world to see<br />

Un instinto me guiaba<br />

A miracle sensation<br />

My guide and inspiration<br />

Now my dream is slowly coming true<br />

The wind is a gentle breeze<br />

EI me hablo de ti<br />

The bells are ringing out<br />

EI canto vuela<br />

They're calling us together<br />

Guiding us forever<br />

Wish my dream would never go away<br />

Barcelona<br />

It was the first time that we met<br />

Barcelona<br />

How can I forget<br />

The moment that you stepped into the room<br />

You took my breath away<br />

Barcelona<br />

La musica vibro<br />

Barcelona<br />

Yella nos unio<br />

And if God is willing<br />

We will meet again<br />

Someday<br />

Let the songs begin<br />

Dejalo nacer<br />

Let the music play<br />

Ah<br />

Make the voices sing<br />

Nace un gran amor<br />

Start the celebration<br />

Ven a mi<br />

And cry<br />

Grita<br />

Come…<br />

Freddie Mercury. Montserrat Caballe<br />

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Freddie Mercury<br />

Born September 5th 1946 in Stone<br />

Town, Zanzibar and named Farrokh<br />

Bulsara, his parents had emigrated<br />

from India to Zanzibar where his father<br />

worked as a clerk for the British government.<br />

As a child he attended a boarding<br />

school in Panchgani, Maharashtra State,<br />

India. He was artistically inclined from a<br />

very young age, and formed a band in which<br />

he played piano. When Zanzibar became<br />

part of the independant country of Tanzania<br />

in 1964 he moved with his family to Feltham,<br />

England. He studied graphic art and design<br />

at Ealing Technical College and School of<br />

Art (now part of the Universty of West<br />

London) from where he graduated in 1969.<br />

Heavily influenced by hard edged bluesbased<br />

rock acts such as Cream and Jimi<br />

Hendrix he began singing with bands in<br />

London. He became friends with guitarist<br />

Brian May and drummer Roger Taylor from<br />

the band Smile, and in 1970 when the bands<br />

lead singer quit Bulsara replaced him. He<br />

then changed the bands name to Queen and<br />

his own name to Freddie Mercury. Bassist<br />

John Deacon joined them in 1971. Queen<br />

incorporated elements from both heavy<br />

metal and glam rock, they debuted on<br />

record in 1973 with Queen, followed in 1974<br />

by Queen II. Despite their blend of vocal<br />

harmonies and layered virtuosic guitar<br />

work, Queen failed to attract much notice<br />

beyond the UK. However in 1974 the album<br />

Sheer Heart Attack shot up the International<br />

charts, and in 1975 A Night At The Opera<br />

sold even better. . The band’s ambitious<br />

approach to both songwriting and studio<br />

production was epitomized by the latter<br />

album’s mock-operatic single Bohemian<br />

Rhapsody, one of a number of Queen compositions<br />

written primarily by Freddie<br />

Mercury. The song spent nine weeks at the<br />

top of the British singles chart, and its<br />

accompanying promotional film helped the<br />

music industry recognise its future in video.<br />

Spectacular success followed in 1977 with<br />

We Are The Champions and We Will Rock<br />

You, both of which became ubiquitous<br />

anthems at sporting events in Britain and<br />

the United States.<br />

By the early 1980’s Queen had become an<br />

International phonomenon, drawing attention<br />

from their elabourately staged performances<br />

in enormous venues, strutting<br />

around the stage in outrageous costumes,<br />

and Freddie effortlessly commanding audiences<br />

of tens of thousands of fans.<br />

Although Queen’s commercial fortunes had<br />

begun to wane by mid decade, the band<br />

arguably reached its pinnacle as a live act<br />

with a stellar performance at the charity<br />

concert Live Aid in 1985. That same year<br />

Freddie released his solo Mr Bad Guy taking<br />

inspiration from disco music.<br />

Freddie later appeared on the sound track of<br />

Dave Clark’s science-fiction musical Time in<br />

1986 and teamed with Spanish soprano<br />

Montserrat Caballe for the semi-operatic<br />

album Barcelona in 1988.<br />

In 1991 Mercury, who had engaged in relationships<br />

with both men and women,<br />

announced that he had been diagnosed with<br />

AIDS. He died a day later from complications<br />

related to the disease. Until shortly before<br />

his death, Mercury had continued to record<br />

with Queen, and he was posthumously featured<br />

on the band’s final album, Made in<br />

Heaven (1995).<br />

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Freddie<br />

Singles Dis<br />

05/09/46 -<br />

1973 I Can Hear Music/Going Back<br />

1985 Living On My Own, Love Me Like<br />

There’s No Tomorrow<br />

1988 The Golden Boy<br />

1992 Re-release, Guide Me Home/How Ca<br />

I Go On, In My Defence, Re-relese,<br />

Barcelona<br />

2006 Re-mix Sunshine People, Love Kills<br />

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Freddie Mercury<br />

ercury<br />

cography<br />

1984 Love Kills, I Was Born To Love<br />

You, Made In Heaven<br />

1986 Time, The Great Pretender<br />

1987 Barcelona<br />

1989 Guide Me Home/How Can I Go On<br />

n 1993 Re-release, The Great Pretender<br />

Living On My Own<br />

2000 Guide Me Home<br />

2019 Time Waits For No One<br />

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Miss High Roller<br />

Verse:<br />

There was a showgirl from Vegas<br />

Her casino smile is so vivacious<br />

She knows how to strut her stuff<br />

That sweet lady can't get enough<br />

Her red velvet dress and high heeled shoes<br />

And yes, she really sings the blues<br />

Here she comes<br />

It's Miss High Roller<br />

Verse:<br />

She got a 1958 Oldsmobile<br />

She was a winner and she's ready to deal<br />

All she really wants is a fine looking man<br />

That's the one she really understand<br />

Here she comes<br />

It's Miss High Roller<br />

Bridge:<br />

She's fallin’ in love with the man she love<br />

They fit together like a hand in glove<br />

Lord knows she's ready to rock this world<br />

Miss High Roller is a red hot girl<br />

Verse:<br />

Her body rollin' like a roulette wheel<br />

Her sexy style are looks to kill<br />

And when the party's over, she's ready to ride<br />

Fellas, you better run, but you cannot hide<br />

Here she comes<br />

It's Miss High Roller<br />

© 2018 - Shawn Adam Williams<br />

Click link to listen to song...<br />

Shawn Adam Williams was born and raised in Atlanta, Georgia on January 23, 1987.<br />

After the loss of his mother, Patricia Williams-Perdue who died of bladder cancer, he decided to<br />

move on. He suffered from anger issues, and types of depression which led him to listen to a lot<br />

of music when he was young.<br />

His passion for music includes rockabilly, roots, blues, gospel, and soul. His rockabilly influences<br />

are: Carl Perkins, Jack Scott, Eddie Cochran, and Jerry Lee Lewis, his blues influences<br />

are: BB King, Buddy Guy, Screamin' Jay Hawkins, Solomon Burke, Gary Moore, and Stevie Ray<br />

Vaughan.<br />

He became a singer, lyricist, and composer to fulfil his spirits and dreams of becoming a true<br />

vocalist, and that's why he speaks the truth through his songs.<br />

His lyrics represent his musical culture, when he focused to become the best lyricist and singer<br />

he could. Also, he has been nominated for four Josie Music Awards, two IMEA Awards, a Gran<br />

Royale Music Award Nomination, an LDM Radio Award Nomination and also, 5 KICMA Award<br />

Nominations. He scored numerous songs on the independent charts. And the rest is history!<br />

Please follow Shawn on Facebook, Twitter and Instagram. Support his music on ReverbNation.<br />

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Lady Of The Dead<br />

In time we were born, she takes it all with her<br />

and the nights rooster, was a crow,<br />

The day's whiled away, while we took our<br />

chances and played<br />

at Le Dia de los Muertos parade<br />

In time you will see, through the ashes of the<br />

storm,<br />

though at the time, it makes no sense at all<br />

though everyone must go, like the wilted roses<br />

who know<br />

and I make my peace with the sky<br />

and I make my peace with the sky<br />

and I make my peace with sky<br />

and I make my peace with the sky<br />

Come on baby, come on make you shine<br />

Gonna bring you to me just for one more time<br />

Its the dia de los muertos parade,<br />

say your game, put your hands together come<br />

and party with me<br />

you know, In time we were born,<br />

she takes it all with her<br />

and the nights rooster, was a crow,<br />

but the day's whiled away, whilst we took our<br />

chances and played<br />

at Le Dia de los Muertos parade<br />

you know, In time we were born,<br />

she takes it all with her<br />

and the nights rooster, was a crow,<br />

but the day's whiled away, whilst we took our<br />

chances and played<br />

at Le Dia de los Muertos parade X 3 oo oo oo<br />

In time you will see, through the ashes of the<br />

storm,<br />

though at the time, it makes no sense at all<br />

though everyone must go, like the wilted roses<br />

who know<br />

and I make my peace with the sky<br />

Credits<br />

released July 23, 2019<br />

Music, lyrics and vocals - Kerri Layton<br />

Drums - Matt Dean<br />

Bass - Jordan Brown<br />

Keys - Benjamin Croft<br />

Baritone Sax - Lottie B<br />

Mastering - Graham Waller<br />

Photography - Gigi Gianella<br />

license<br />

(C) all rights reserved<br />

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Kerri Layton<br />

Kerri Layton is a singer songwriter and performing<br />

artist who lives in East London. The 'Vocal Priestess<br />

and Hoodoo Woman' has earned herself a great<br />

reputation on the live jazz and blues circuit as an<br />

enigmatic live vocalist and entertainer, performing<br />

for a wide range of events and festivals and at some<br />

of London's most prestigious venues such as The<br />

BBC, Alexandra Palace, Hackney Empire, taking<br />

slots on BBC Radio, performing at Glastonbury<br />

Festival and is an in demand singer on the international<br />

private event circuit with her creations at<br />

Dixiebird Records.<br />

Lady of the Dead is Kerri’s brand new single,<br />

recorded in London and features her line up of talented<br />

jazz musicians.<br />

Matt Dean - Drums, Jordan Brown - Fretless bass<br />

and Guitar, Lottie B - Sax, Ben Croft - Keyboards<br />

I wrote this song for a live show at Alexandra Palace<br />

back in 2016, it was a Day of the Dead Parade<br />

which we had the pleasure of creatively directing as<br />

well as performing in. The whole project carried a<br />

weight of personal semblance to it as 2016 was one<br />

of those tragic years where a lot of people very<br />

close to me died, my aunt was diagnosed and later<br />

died of cancer, my best friend suddenly died on a<br />

night out and an old family friend, as well as other<br />

personal tragedies, it was the year from hell. We<br />

also lost a lot of influential artists that year, David<br />

Bowie, Debbie Reynolds, Carrie Fisher, George<br />

Michael, the list went on.<br />

This song really gave me chance to use the Mexican<br />

tradition as a way to explore the grief I was experiencing<br />

with different eyes. The Dia Del Las Muertos<br />

(Day of the Dead) is an ancient tradition which honors<br />

the ancestors and the dead by gathering in<br />

peaceful reflection, making offerings of sweet<br />

bread, cakes, and flowers on shrines. The Bond<br />

movie made it seem like some huge annual celebration<br />

in Mexico City, which of course it wasn't, but is<br />

now and Alexandra Palace wanted to recreate it. I<br />

got the call to work on the project and somehow it<br />

all tied in very personally to what I had been experiencing.<br />

In fact in the last 4 years prior to 2016 I had<br />

lost nearly 20 friends and close family members to<br />

various tragedies. The song really meant a lot to me<br />

and I held all of them very close to me in my heart<br />

as I was writing it, it really gave me chance to sit<br />

with the sadness and turn it into something completely<br />

new.<br />

I wanted the song not to be about loss and sadness,<br />

I wanted it to be about life itself, which is ironic,<br />

given the title of the track, 'Lady of the Dead'.<br />

The opening lyric for the song (the one you see<br />

here) is my favourite one. The start of this composition<br />

had to honor the essence of the veil between<br />

the spirit world and ours 'In time we were born' It literally<br />

means, you had to wait a very long time for<br />

your turn, and it's your turn to live now!<br />

'She takes it all with her' this literally means when<br />

we leave, to depart Earth and go home from wherever<br />

we came, the power that is mother earth, nature,<br />

re absorbing the energy of of physical bodies, It literally<br />

means, you leave your body but your spirit<br />

departs.<br />

'And the night's rooster was a crow' The symbolism<br />

of the birds is a nod to the shamans and the aztec<br />

culture of using totem animals to gain a deeper perspective<br />

into an aspect of life we may need help<br />

with.<br />

The crow is mysterious, the shape shifter, in alchemy<br />

the crow is used to describe the freeing of the<br />

Phoenix Spirit from the bounds of the physical, in<br />

direct contrast to the rooster who is by nature<br />

strong and is associated with rising and shining!<br />

I used it in this instance to create a contrast<br />

between what we perceive to be physical life and<br />

the transcending into another energetic form,<br />

whether that be a memory, love, or the actual spirit<br />

world itself.<br />

Basically, in a nutshell, these lyrics mean us coming<br />

from some other place, a place we have been waiting<br />

a long time to come here from, some may call it<br />

heaven or the other side, and our experience here is<br />

not what we think it is, and that somehow made me<br />

feel at peace having lost so many loved ones, the<br />

thought that this wasn't their only existence, the<br />

thought that that they were here living life and now<br />

they are off flying into another dimension, and it<br />

wasn't just the end, it was only the beginning.<br />

https://www.facebook.com/kerrilaytonmusic<br />

www.kerrilayton.com and<br />

www.dixiebirdrecords.com<br />

Photo Day of the Dead shot Gigi Giannella 2016)<br />

Photo band shot Daniella Fleckenstein 2018)<br />

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Time To Rise<br />

By Kevin Gullickson - Radio Drive<br />

TIME TO RISE<br />

Break the mold you thought was you<br />

Fit the pieces into something new<br />

Something new<br />

Take the fragments of your life<br />

Broken shattered, cut you like a knife<br />

Like a knife<br />

Let it sharpen, let it bleed<br />

Let it bring out everything you need<br />

What you need<br />

It’s time to rise<br />

It’s time to rise<br />

Way up to the sky<br />

It’s time to rise<br />

It’s time to rise<br />

Spread your wings and fly<br />

Life is flowing, life is change<br />

Nothing constant ever stays the same<br />

Stays the same<br />

Never think your life is trash<br />

Look and see the beauty from the ash<br />

From the ash<br />

CHORUS<br />

Wake up, get out<br />

It's time to go<br />

Ready or not, it's time to show all you've got<br />

All you've got<br />

CHORUS<br />

All words & music by Kevin Gullickson (BMI)<br />

c2018<br />

Links To Radio Drive<br />

http://www.radiodrive.net<br />

http://www.facebook.com/radiodrive<br />

http://www.twitter.com/radiodrivemusic<br />

http://www.youtube.com/RadioDriveMusic<br />

http://www.instagram.com/radio_drive-<br />

How it came together:<br />

Back in 2014-2015 I was riding the wave of<br />

success with my song "A Taste of Heaven". I<br />

was getting massive radio play, topping indie<br />

charts, winning awards and nominations and<br />

getting international attention. I had a band<br />

playing local clubs. I was working with a<br />

management/booking agency helping to<br />

advance my career. They were setting up a<br />

3-4 month European tour for the summer of<br />

2015. I was working with a music attorney in<br />

New York City, shopping my music to labels.<br />

Things were going great. Then everything<br />

came to an end in May/June 2015. The tour<br />

never happened. The band members went<br />

their own ways, some getting new jobs and<br />

commitments and had to step down. Then<br />

worst of all, my brother died of cancer in<br />

June 2015. Everything crashed. My life<br />

crashed. I had to step back and reassess my<br />

life and see how I could put it back together.<br />

I didn't sing or play guitar for about a year. I<br />

didn't write any songs. I didn't know if I could<br />

even write another song, let along release<br />

another album. I was in a major rut and didn't<br />

know how to get out. Then my wife started to<br />

encourage me to keep writing, to keep going,<br />

to keep following my dream. So I did. Slowly<br />

in 2017, I began singing, playing guitar and<br />

writing songs. In April 2018 I released my<br />

album "She Colors My World".<br />

The song "Time To Rise" along with others on<br />

my album "She Colors My World" came out of<br />

this time of rebuilding my life. In the song I<br />

wrote: "Break the mold you thought was you,<br />

fit the pieces into something new". This mold<br />

I refer to was my expectations, which had all<br />

crashed and were broken. Nothing I thought<br />

would happen, actually happened. That shat-<br />

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Radio Drive<br />

tered my life. I had to take the shattered<br />

pieces of my life and put them back<br />

together. It was painful. The shattered<br />

pieces were sharp and I bled. But I persisted<br />

and kept moving forward. I'm a firm<br />

believer that all things work together for<br />

good. There will be tears, but there will be<br />

joy soon enough. Life is constantly changing<br />

and I needed to go where the peace<br />

was flowing, or directing me on the road to<br />

healing. I knew I had to keep pressing on.<br />

And I did. This song "Time To Rise" captures<br />

that belief and the process I went<br />

through.<br />

Radio Drive is an Alternative Pop Rock<br />

band featuring Kevin Gullickson. As the<br />

engine behind Radio Drive, Kevin has won<br />

international awards and nominations for<br />

his songs and music videos. The music of<br />

Radio Drive is being aired on radio around<br />

the world alongside major artists and is<br />

receiving rave reviews by music critics.<br />

He has been featured on web zines and<br />

radio shows in Europe, Canada and the<br />

USA.<br />

Kevin’s music has landed on charts on<br />

indie stations around the world, including<br />

Canada, Germany, the UK and the South<br />

Pacific. His music has been used on shows<br />

airing on Animal Planet, National<br />

Geographic, Comedy Central, Fox<br />

Channels, History Channel, Spike TV and<br />

Discovery Channel in the USA and TV programs<br />

in England, Mexico, New Zealand<br />

and Australia.<br />

Kevin’s 2014 release of “A Taste of<br />

Heaven” was raved about by critics and<br />

received massive radio play on indie stations<br />

around the world, winning awards<br />

and nominations.<br />

In mid <strong>August</strong> 2015 Kevin finished a project<br />

with internationally recognized producer,<br />

Stuart Epps. Stuart has worked<br />

with some of the most influential artists in<br />

music, including George Harrison, Bill<br />

Wyman, Jimmy Page, Elton John, Oasis<br />

and more. Kevin now has the honor of<br />

being listed among the artists Stuart has<br />

worked with. The result is a magnificent<br />

song entitled “Humanity”.<br />

In 2017 Kevin was chosen by BEM Wireless<br />

to endorse their products. Currently Kevin<br />

has engaged in a European radio campaign<br />

and is receiving extensive radio play<br />

of his music and in September and<br />

October 2017 “Humanity” has been in the<br />

Top 20 on the ToP INDéCOUVERTES—<br />

Official European Independent Music<br />

Chart and in October has landed at #2.<br />

In April 2018 Kevin<br />

released his 5th full<br />

album titled “She<br />

Colors My World”,<br />

mastered by Robert<br />

L. Smith at Defy<br />

Recordings (credits<br />

include David Bowie,<br />

Aerosmith, Paul<br />

McCartney, just to<br />

name a few).<br />

Immediately songs from<br />

this new CD have been<br />

receiving international<br />

attention, with<br />

three already<br />

receiving<br />

awards from<br />

the<br />

Akademia<br />

Music<br />

Awards.<br />

Currently,<br />

in 2019<br />

Kevin is<br />

finishing a<br />

video for<br />

his single<br />

“Sweet<br />

Thing”<br />

from the<br />

album<br />

“She<br />

Colors My<br />

World”<br />

along with<br />

a new CD<br />

titled “In The<br />

Light”,<br />

scheduled for<br />

release late<br />

summer 2019.<br />

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Winds o<br />

by The<br />

Winds of Change<br />

There’s a picture on your wall of a happy<br />

little boy<br />

Rosy cheeked and smiling as he holds his<br />

favourite toy<br />

Beaming at the camera unsure what’s<br />

going on<br />

All he knows in his young life is parents<br />

love and fun<br />

His bright eyes twinkle what do they see<br />

Do they see the future or wonder what<br />

will be<br />

Small child playing on the sand holding a<br />

balloon<br />

Gust of wind pulls it from his grasp he<br />

feels his life’s in ruins<br />

Could anything be worse than that<br />

What on earth could be worse than that<br />

Chorus<br />

There’s a cold wind blowing and it’s coming<br />

soon<br />

Doesn’t matter if you wrap up warm<br />

Not a chance that you’ll escape the storm<br />

Winds of change mean too much damage<br />

done<br />

Growing up you find how much your<br />

vision starts to change<br />

Watching through an adult’s eyes things<br />

don’t look the same<br />

Don’t you wish it was like when you were<br />

young<br />

Did you hope that what you saw would<br />

come to pass<br />

Looking back through twilight years only<br />

brings you pain Winds of Change<br />

The things you wish that you had done<br />

haunt you yet again<br />

Don’t blame yourself for what is not your<br />

fault<br />

Don’t take the blame for what is not your<br />

fault<br />

www.theVillage.me.uk<br />

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The Village<br />

f Change<br />

Village<br />

I've chosen the title song from my current<br />

album Winds of Change.<br />

My initial inspiration for the song was an<br />

old picture that my mum showed me of me<br />

as a very young child holding a bouncy<br />

ball. It was a photograph that was obviously<br />

posed in a professional photographer's<br />

studio. It set me thinking that if the picture<br />

was not of me but of a random little<br />

boy how did his life turn out.<br />

I talk firstly about the innocence of fun and<br />

childhood and then say that when everyone<br />

grows up things change and not necessarily<br />

for the better. Hence the lyric<br />

hinting at a change by stating that "there is<br />

a cold wind blowing, and it's coming way<br />

too soon".<br />

The spirit of Syd Barrett, Robyn Hitchcock<br />

and Andy Partridge permeate the music of<br />

pink sock wearing trilby hatted troubadour<br />

Phil Matthews a.k.a. the Village. The<br />

Village is a magical place for outsiders and<br />

oddballs.<br />

Phil has built up a following around the<br />

Midlands live circuit in UK winning hearts<br />

and minds with his performances.<br />

Phil has written and performed with many<br />

bands over the years and the Village is his<br />

latest alter ego, with his music played on<br />

hundreds of radio stations worldwide and<br />

his album tracks streamed and downloaded<br />

thousands of times, while Always<br />

On Her Mind and Secret Garden from the<br />

album Carnival of Fools have both enjoyed<br />

lengthy spells at the top of the British folk<br />

rock chart compiled by N1M.com, and currently<br />

has 4 albums available.<br />

www.theVillage.me.uk<br />

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The Riv<br />

The River City<br />

A city that rose to empire might<br />

Raging fire falls from the darkened night<br />

Strike for time, strike for gold<br />

Strike with steel they never grow old<br />

Birds on towers watch over this Scouse land<br />

Raise your hand if you know the band<br />

Raise your hand if you know the band.<br />

Chorus<br />

This River City flows through my mind<br />

Around each corner see what you find<br />

Reflected light on the flowing tide<br />

Waterfront, three graces, maritime pride.<br />

Waterfront, three graces, maritime pride.<br />

Verse 2<br />

History is past the future shines<br />

Buildings rise for educated minds<br />

Daylight nightlife hear the sounds<br />

Colours fly above opposing grounds<br />

A city where you are never alone<br />

Come walk with me my Liverpool home.<br />

Repeat chorus<br />

The historical meaning of the lyrics<br />

A city that rose to empire might<br />

( Liverpool became the second most important<br />

city behind London<br />

in the time of Queen Victoria).<br />

Raging fire falls from the darkened night.<br />

(The partial destruction of the city in WWII)<br />

Strike for time,<br />

(unions striking for a shorter working week)<br />

strike for gold<br />

(Unions striking for constant pay rises)<br />

Strike with steel they never grow old<br />

(A warning for young people of Liverpool<br />

against carrying a knife)<br />

Birds on towers watch over this Scouse<br />

land.<br />

(The Liver Birds above the Royal Liver building)<br />

Raise your hand if you know the band.<br />

(Beatles – obviously)<br />

Raise your hand if you know the band.<br />

This River City flows through my mind<br />

Around each corner see what you find<br />

Reflected light on the flowing tide<br />

(The River Mersey)<br />

Waterfront, three graces, maritime pride.<br />

(Three Graces consist of the Royal Liver<br />

Building,<br />

The Cunard Building and the Port of<br />

Liverpool Building).<br />

Waterfront, three graces, maritime pride.<br />

History is past the future shines<br />

(The city rising out of the dark times into<br />

where it is today)<br />

Buildings rise for educated minds<br />

(The buildings being but for students)<br />

Daylight nightlife hear the sounds<br />

(The thriving nightlife within the city)<br />

Colours fly above opposing grounds.<br />

(Goodinson and Anfield. Liverpool and<br />

Everton FC)<br />

A city where you are never alone.<br />

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U1UIZVg<br />

8zSU&feature=youtu.be<br />

How to introduce myself?<br />

Well, my name is Colin B Leonard and class<br />

myself as a Paranormal Thriller writer and<br />

lyricist. I have been told my writing style is<br />

descriptive aligned with a methodical<br />

approach to historical facts in both writing<br />

novels and lyrics. My style, combined withwhat<br />

one can call an imaginative mind has<br />

enabled me to create a brand along with a<br />

unique voice. (I wrote with enjoyment until I<br />

was informed I had a unique voice, now I<br />

write with trepidation all the while hoping<br />

that voice remains).<br />

I married my wife Julie in 1984. We are still<br />

happily married (yes my love I have written<br />

it) and together we have three adult boys. I<br />

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Colin B Leonard<br />

er City<br />

work full time in the funeral industry and for<br />

the Merseyside and Sefton Police Service<br />

carrying out duties for the coroner. My latest<br />

novel, ‘The Case of the Incessant Jack<br />

the Ripper’ is derived from actual crime<br />

scenes attended. The modern day murders<br />

within the novel have been compiled from<br />

many to ensure anonymity of any actual<br />

murder.<br />

My venture into the world of lyric writing<br />

arrived when singer/songwriter and former<br />

co-worker Joe Rogerson requested of me to<br />

write him lyrics about the city of Liverpool.<br />

Joe (who hails from Jersey) wanted a song<br />

which would pay his respects to the city<br />

which he now calls home.<br />

The lyrics were written and accepted within<br />

an thirty minutes one sunny workday afternoon.<br />

Some tweaking was required to fit<br />

words to music, however, the final song was<br />

what a song about a city should be, historical,<br />

harmonious and a reflection of the<br />

heart. Joe put music to the words which far<br />

outweighed the music in my head to which I<br />

wrote the lyrics.<br />

Since that day I have written over eighty<br />

song lyrics for Joe, although due to his work<br />

and family commitments most remain only<br />

words on paper. Therefore, should any budding<br />

musician wish to have lyrics to put to<br />

music you are more than welcome. Most<br />

lyrics I can relay the thought of the music<br />

(humming or worse my singing voice), as<br />

with The River City, with which I wrote the<br />

lyrics.<br />

leonardsx4@hotmail.com<br />

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Music For The H<br />

A New Platform For Musician<br />

Iset up Music for The Head and Heart – www.musicfortheheadandheart.buzz<br />

as a platform, as a collective<br />

voice for artists and performers who have a<br />

love of music. The purpose of Music for The Head and<br />

Heart brings together lovers of music from all over the<br />

world to share ideas and engage in collective music<br />

exploration and collaboration.<br />

There are different ingredients in this platform –<br />

Artist Video<br />

Artists are invited to the platform to talk about their<br />

love of music, experiences and creative process. This<br />

is done in a very relaxed manner and we film a series<br />

of short video clips of discussion followed by a musical<br />

performance. Those appearing on the platform can<br />

then invite another artist to appear on MHH. These<br />

videos are rolled out in blocks each year and showcase<br />

a wonderful variety of creative expression, ie<br />

“Music for The Head and Heart”. We already have 20<br />

artists recorded for the platform from all over the<br />

globe from all different musical styles. These include<br />

seasoned award-winning songwriters to up and coming<br />

new artists.<br />

Articles<br />

All videos on the main site are transcribed into articles,<br />

and the site also features articles on different<br />

aspects of musical creation and the “music business”.<br />

We also welcome articles to inspire, provoke and create<br />

musical discussion. The purpose of MHH is to<br />

share the collective love of music and how different<br />

music can connect us in different ways. This also<br />

means musical education and reflections on how<br />

music can be used as a powerful tool to show how<br />

connected we all truly are on this planet<br />

Live MHH Performances and the launch in Leeds Oct<br />

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Nick Cody<br />

ead And Heart<br />

s For Those Who Love Music<br />

26th 2019<br />

Throughout the year there will be MHH live performances<br />

from artists who have been featured on the<br />

site. There will be a strong theme of collaboration<br />

between artists which helps in making MHH a truly<br />

unique platform. The musical platforms allow for new<br />

ways of expression between artists, and showcase<br />

how music can bring us together and create a collective<br />

voice that inspires and provokes new ways of<br />

thinking and feeling. MHH is constantly developing<br />

and evolving to give voice to all those artists and listeners<br />

who love music<br />

The platform will launch on October 26th at<br />

The Heart Arts Centre in Leeds<br />

Shire Oak Hall<br />

Bennett Road<br />

Leeds, LS6 3HN<br />

United Kingdom<br />

The artists performing original material will be<br />

• Miranda Arieh<br />

• The Captain of the Lost Waves<br />

• Emily Mercer<br />

• Belha Hutchinson<br />

Tickets are just £6.00 for the whole evening -<br />

https://www.heartcentre.org.uk/event/launch-eveningfor-music-for-the-head-and-heart/<br />

Regards<br />

Nick Cody<br />

Founder of Music for The Head and Heart<br />

www.musicfortheheadandheart.buzz<br />

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Did You Find Jesus In Nashville?<br />

Did You Find Jesus In<br />

Nashville?<br />

verse one<br />

Did You Wonder down the highway,<br />

amongst darkness and despair?<br />

Thinking there was no one to light a<br />

lamp for you there.<br />

You looked in that whiskey bottle, did it<br />

make you so blind?<br />

When you reach rock bottom it's really<br />

hard to find.<br />

Chorus<br />

Amongst the music and the honky<br />

tonks<br />

Did you roll to the bottom of the hill?<br />

Or did you find the sunshine,<br />

And find Jesus in Nashville?<br />

(C)Murielle<br />

Nicolas<br />

Verse two<br />

Did you find some kindness and laughter<br />

on your way?<br />

Or were you spurned by others almost<br />

everyday?<br />

Did you pick up the old bible, you found<br />

dusty on the shelf<br />

Make something of what was missing<br />

from yourself?<br />

Chorus<br />

Did you find the church tat fed ya in the<br />

town<br />

Who made you feel good about yourself,<br />

pick you up when your down?<br />

Did you go to the church where the<br />

cowboys go?<br />

Or Baptist or Nazarine there are much<br />

more you know.<br />

Chorus x2<br />

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Dina Andrews<br />

DINA ANDREWS - THE PINK COW-<br />

GIRL - BIOGRAPHY<br />

Dina Andrews, aka ‘The Pink Cowgirl’ is a country<br />

& folk singer/songwriter from Jersey in the<br />

Channel Islands, who also presents country<br />

music radio shows for 2 digital radio stations.<br />

Her early influences include Kris Kristofferson,<br />

Gordon Lightfoot, Randy Travis and more<br />

recently, modern artists - among them Brad<br />

Paisley & Alison Krauss, among others. Her<br />

own voice and style have been likened to the<br />

late Kirsty MacColl. Dina started playing violin at<br />

age 7, discovered guitar aged 10, has been<br />

playing ever since and began writing her own<br />

songs 8 years ago, after studying & gaining a<br />

degree in English literature (and writing & publishing<br />

3 novels). Her songs soon began to be<br />

noticed and some were recorded & released by<br />

‘Paramount Song’ in Nashville, either sung by<br />

Dina or by various other female or male vocalists.<br />

She has performed many times in the<br />

Channel Isles and has played several live sessions<br />

on BBC Radio Jersey..... Here’s an example;<br />

https://www.bbc.co.uk/sounds/play/p04m68mv<br />

She is a constant supporter of several local<br />

charities and has organised & performed at<br />

many fundraising shows, as well as donating all<br />

proceeds from her 1st single release to ‘The<br />

Jersey Brain Tumour Charity’. Here are a couple<br />

of shows she did recently; Peas & Glove - An<br />

amazing charity supporting a young Jersey lad<br />

who had a terrible accident.https://www.facebook.com/peasandglove/photos/a.16078765194<br />

98097/23372176165639 80/?type=3&theater<br />

‘The Jersey Brain Tumour Charity’ - Dina set up<br />

a big charity event with some musician friends &<br />

raised much-needed cash for this fantastic<br />

charity.https://www.facebook.com/jerseybraintumour/photos/a.1411989979022155/2263205537<br />

2 33924/?type=3&theater All proceeds from her<br />

debut single ‘Tombstone Tarnia’ were donated<br />

to ‘J.B.T.C.’ Under the pseudonym ‘The Jersey<br />

Cowgirl’ Dina has a country music radio show<br />

going out at least 3 times weekly on ‘Irish<br />

Country Radio’<br />

https://www.irishcountryradio.net/presenters<br />

https://www.irishcountryradio.net/schedule Dina<br />

also presents a one-hour weekly DJ slot as ‘The<br />

Pink Cowgirl’ on Wigan based country music<br />

digital radio show ‘Red Rose Country’.... available<br />

every Sunday on ‘Mixcloud’.<br />

As well as co-writing with several US country<br />

singers, Dina’s own songs are being picked up &<br />

recorded by established US country artists<br />

(more news soon!). Her first album<br />

‘Complicated’ was produced by Sam Falle and<br />

recorded in Nashville, Tennessee in 2017 &<br />

2018, partly in The Zac Brown Band’s ‘Southern<br />

Ground Nashville’ studio & partly in Sam’s own<br />

Nashville studio. While in Nashville for recording,<br />

Dina played live at the legendary ‘Tootsies’<br />

and ‘Swinging Doors Saloon’.<br />

The album ‘Complicated’ released in September<br />

2018, is now on general release and currently<br />

being played by country radio DJs worldwide<br />

and Dina has 2 singles being released soon,<br />

‘Love’s Table’ and ‘My Christmas Angel’.<br />

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L4BXqWYqg<br />

_w<br />

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wiY_NminL5<br />

g These songs are available for download now<br />

on all of the usual digital outlets.<br />

UK Country Radio recently dedicated a page on<br />

their website to ‘Dina Andrews’ : http://ukcountryradio.com/artist-detail.php?artist_id=297<br />

and<br />

featured her ‘Complicated’ album for a week on<br />

the radio show. She has won three Nashville<br />

Directors Awards for songs she entered for the<br />

‘Nashville Songwriters Competition’ Those<br />

songs Are : "Let The desert Wind Blow",<br />

"Always Loved the Spring" and "Sycamore Tree<br />

(not recorded as yet!)" and is currently finalising<br />

a new song ‘The Chosen Few’, inspired by<br />

WWI’s Armistice Day and writing for a new<br />

album to be recorded & released in 2019. Early<br />

in 2019, Dina was nominated for the<br />

‘International Singer-Songwriters Association’<br />

‘International Female Songwriter Of The Year’<br />

award. She made it to the finals and is looking<br />

forward to the awards ceremony, which will be<br />

held in Atlanta, Georgia in <strong>August</strong>. https://issasongwriters.com/international-finalists/<br />

https://issasongwriters.com/2019-awards-show/<br />

Dina is now the official I.S.S.A. representative<br />

for the Channel Islands in the UK. Contact:<br />

Website: https://thepinkjerseycowgirl.com/<br />

Email: pinkjerseycowgirl@gmail.com<br />

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/thepinkjerseycowgirl/<br />

Youtube:https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC0r<br />

AEPwwoHXYkf4bvArti0A/videos<br />

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