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Issue No:8<br />
The Lyric <strong>Write</strong>rs <strong>Magazine</strong><br />
The Queen Of Rock<br />
Freddie Mercury<br />
REGULAR FEATURES<br />
Introducing - Bill Halloran<br />
Lyrical Do Not - Daryn Wright<br />
Song Lyrics - Trevor Dimoff<br />
Lyricslinger - Simon Wright<br />
The Lyrics Doctor<br />
Vocal Coach - Paul Sykes<br />
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In This Issue...<br />
Paul<br />
deMarco<br />
Pages 20 - 23<br />
Featuring<br />
16 Dennis A Westgate<br />
18 Paul deMarco<br />
20 Freddie Mercury<br />
22 Freddie Mercury<br />
24 Shawn Adam Williams<br />
26 Kerri Layton<br />
28 Kevin Gullickson<br />
30 The Village<br />
32 Colin B Leonard<br />
34 Nick Cody<br />
36 Dina Andrews<br />
Regulars<br />
04 The Lyrics Doctor<br />
06 Daryn Wright<br />
08 Trevor Dimoff<br />
10 Paul Sykes<br />
12 Bill O’Halloran<br />
14 Simon Wright<br />
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Another month has flown past, and here I am again with a new<br />
group of talented songwriters showcasing their skills to the world.<br />
It always gives me great pleasure to work on every single article,<br />
and I try to remain sensitive to the theme as I fit the articles to the<br />
pages.<br />
This month I’ve touched upon Freddie Mercury’s career, who was<br />
perhaps the greatest frontman ever to perform upon the musical<br />
stage. He enjoyed huge success in his short musical career, and<br />
more posthumously. He’ll live forever in my own mind as one of the<br />
worlds greatest ever performers. A pure genius, who knew exactly<br />
how to work an audience.<br />
Please may I request you take a look at the links on each article to<br />
find out more about the artists who contribute, and please follow the<br />
link to listen to the featured song when lyrics are displayed.<br />
If you’d like to appear in a future issue why not send me an email<br />
and I’ll do my level best to fit you into a future issue.<br />
jane@writeawaymagazine.co.uk<br />
Likewise, I’m always open to offers for regular writers to<br />
contribute articles on lyric/songwriting. Every idea will be seriously<br />
considered for inclusion. I’d dearly love to find a<br />
regular writer on Home Recording. If this is you, please get in<br />
touch. So many avenues to take this magazine...<br />
Please forward to me any lyric related questions that you may have<br />
via e-mail and I’ll pass them on to our Lyrics Doctor to answer in a<br />
future issue. Don’t be shy, this magazine is here to help lyricists of<br />
all levels to improve their skills and find inspiration for future lyrics.<br />
If you have a skill, service or craft related to songwriting and would<br />
like an affordable advertising platform please drop me an email to<br />
discuss.<br />
Jane xxx<br />
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The Lyri<br />
Jane Shields from<br />
Worcester, England, asks<br />
how a lyricist with limited<br />
musical knowledge might<br />
estimate the number of<br />
verses and choruses needed<br />
for a three-minute pop<br />
song. Similarly, Peter<br />
Dalton from Canberra,<br />
Australia, asks how a lyricist<br />
can know how long a<br />
song will be. The classic<br />
pop formula is two or three<br />
verse/chorus pairs and perhaps<br />
a bridge. You’ll usually<br />
have four or six or eight<br />
lines for each verse, a chorus<br />
that’s either half as<br />
long or the same length as<br />
the verse, and a bridge of<br />
about the same length as<br />
the verse. Of course, this<br />
can vary dramatically<br />
depending on the tempo<br />
and myriad other factors,<br />
but most of my songs that<br />
follow that recipe come in<br />
between two and four minutes.<br />
One way to check is<br />
to find another artist’s tune<br />
that has roughly the same<br />
beat you envision for your<br />
composition. Try singing or<br />
chanting your lyrics over<br />
the structure. If it fits into,<br />
say, Honky Tonk Woman or<br />
Respect or Proud Mary, it’ll<br />
probably come in at about<br />
three minutes.<br />
Sharon Messa from<br />
Glasgow asks whether it’s<br />
OK to change the words in<br />
a pre-chorus. The flippant<br />
answer would be, “Of<br />
course. You can do what<br />
you want. It’s your song!”<br />
But more seriously, there’s<br />
a reason song structures<br />
have developed the way<br />
they have, and repetition of<br />
the chorus (and I tend to<br />
consider the pre-chorus to<br />
be part of the chorus)<br />
helps make a song catchy<br />
and memorable. That said,<br />
songwriters do sometimes<br />
change parts of the chorus.<br />
In Alternative Facts, I tweak<br />
both the pre-chorus and the<br />
chorus. The first pre-chorus<br />
begins with the lines,<br />
“Here’s alternative fact<br />
Number One/What we had<br />
is really done.” Then the<br />
second and third pre-choruses<br />
(logically enough)<br />
become alternative fact<br />
Number Two and Number<br />
Three, with corresponding<br />
rhymes. The chorus itself<br />
also shifts, with the first<br />
instance starting “An alternate<br />
truth you know it ain’t<br />
right/Light is black and<br />
dark is white/We ain’t broken<br />
only cracked/To say<br />
we’re through is alternative<br />
fact.” In the next instance,<br />
the third line becomes<br />
“We’re unglued but still<br />
intact,” and the final time<br />
it’s “We should add but you<br />
subtract.” Of course, part<br />
of the conceit of the song<br />
is the litany of alternative<br />
facts one, two, and three,<br />
so the pre-chorus had to<br />
change (and in that respect<br />
it might be considered part<br />
of the verse). For the chorus<br />
itself, I could have used<br />
just one of the variations I<br />
chose, but I think there’s<br />
enough memorable repetition<br />
to allow for replacing<br />
the third line, which to my<br />
ear makes the song more<br />
interesting.<br />
Since I received your question,<br />
I’ve been looking<br />
around for hit songs that<br />
change out part of the chorus,<br />
and it’s not easy to find<br />
them. (I’d welcome any<br />
other examples readers<br />
manage to unearth.) The<br />
Beatles make small tweaks<br />
to Day Tripper, In My Life, I<br />
Feel Fine, and several others.<br />
The Rolling Stones do<br />
it in Wild Horses and Dead<br />
Flowers, as does<br />
Springsteen in Brilliant<br />
Disguise. In Life During<br />
Wartime, Talking Heads<br />
switch out the third line of<br />
every instance of the chorus.<br />
Each one begins, “This<br />
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cs Doctor<br />
ain't no party, this ain't no<br />
disco/This ain't no fooling<br />
around” and ends “I ain’t got<br />
time for that now.” But the third<br />
line shifts from “No time for<br />
dancing, or lovey dovey,” to the<br />
deliciously evocative (for those<br />
who knew New York in the ‘80s)<br />
“This ain't no Mudd Club, or<br />
C.B.G.B.,” and then to “I'd like to<br />
hold you, I'd love to kiss you.”<br />
Before the final instance, there<br />
are four lines that follow the<br />
chords and melody of the chorus<br />
but have entirely different<br />
lyrics—therefore serving almost<br />
as a bridge, which the song otherwise<br />
lacks. In other words, it’s<br />
always good to be aware of the<br />
rules and it’s generally best to<br />
follow them. But when it makes<br />
sense to you, go ahead and<br />
change the pre-chorus or the<br />
chorus--because you can do<br />
what you want. It’s your song!<br />
Happy SongwR x iting<br />
The Lyrics Doctor<br />
www.thegincident.com<br />
Note from the editor...<br />
If you have a lyrics-related<br />
question you’d like answered<br />
please e-mail it to me and I’ll<br />
forward it on to<br />
The Lyrics Doctor.<br />
jane@writeawaymagazine.co.uk<br />
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Daryn Wright<br />
Do Not Series<br />
Hitting The Snooze Button<br />
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we are trying to<br />
lever lyric. It is postion<br />
our thoughts<br />
too much. This<br />
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avoid it? We can<br />
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best time to write?<br />
or everyone. You<br />
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, so we will talk<br />
our minds are the<br />
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, are masters of crewe<br />
are dreaming.<br />
greatest stories<br />
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and turn<br />
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best chance at<br />
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we can encourage<br />
wonder freely, or to<br />
pecific path you<br />
efore you sleep.<br />
happen in the REM<br />
ovement) portion of<br />
your sleep, which is a deep<br />
sleep state consisting on the<br />
average of about 20% of your<br />
sleep time. Although it is difficult<br />
to remember an entire<br />
dream, it is not uncommon to<br />
remember the last 10 minutes of<br />
your dream. You may be one of<br />
the unlucky few who have difficulties<br />
remembering any portion<br />
of the dream. There may be an<br />
underlying reason why you can’t<br />
remember.<br />
Anxiety, stress, medication,<br />
health issues, and other similar<br />
factors can hinder your ability to<br />
recall a dream. In some cases,<br />
it is the opposite. Determining<br />
which one helps you or hinders<br />
you may be worth investigating.<br />
It is true some people naturally<br />
remember their dreams in vivid<br />
details from beginning to end.<br />
Those who have the most creativity<br />
seem to remember more<br />
than those who are not as creative.<br />
Daily creative exercises<br />
can help over time.<br />
When is the best time to remember<br />
what your dream was<br />
about? The best time to remember<br />
your dream is within the first<br />
90 seconds after waking up.<br />
Making a habit of writing down<br />
your thoughts and dreams within<br />
the first 10 minutes of waking<br />
can give you ample opportunity<br />
to capture your minds masterpiece<br />
dreams. When you are<br />
writing during this time, it is<br />
important to get it all down.<br />
Don’t worry about rhymes,<br />
rhythm, patterns, or any other<br />
detail that may get between you<br />
and the paper.<br />
We can induce our dreams by<br />
thinking about a specific story,<br />
scenario, lyric, or whatever it is<br />
you are working on, and keeping<br />
it in your thoughts while you<br />
drift off to sleep.<br />
You may miss out on this creative<br />
atmosphere by drifting<br />
back to sleep. Do not cheat<br />
yourself by hitting the snooze<br />
button.<br />
Written by Daryn Wright<br />
www.darynwright.com<br />
www.reverbnation.com/darynwri<br />
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HOW YOUR LYRICS BECO<br />
The Steps To Take A Song Lyric To<br />
Recorded Song<br />
You’ve finished the lyrics to your song. If you<br />
don’t know how to write the music, your next<br />
step is to find a co-writer who can write the<br />
music for your song.<br />
Finding A Co-writing Partner<br />
As with any relationship, it can take time and<br />
effort to find a co-writing partner who is a<br />
good fit. You’re looking for someone with skills<br />
and experience that complements your skill<br />
set. Also consider their dependability, their<br />
communication skills and compatible musical<br />
goals.<br />
For example, if you want to write lyrics for<br />
songs that could be commercially released<br />
and your co-writer is able to write the music<br />
but can’t record it to a high standard you will<br />
find yourself frustrated unless you can also<br />
find someone to record and perform it.<br />
Clear communication will lead to a better relationship<br />
and stronger songs.<br />
So you better understand what to look for in a<br />
co-writing partner, here are the steps that your<br />
co-writer needs to complete to take your lyrics<br />
and create a recording of your finished song…<br />
Finalize the Lyrics<br />
Approve/edit the lyrics, changes to improve the<br />
lyrics might be suggested. Be open to suggestions<br />
from your co-writer, their goal is the<br />
same as yours, to create the best song possible.<br />
You both need to agree on the final version<br />
of the lyrics and the final song structure<br />
before moving on to recording the song (for<br />
more about writing a complete song lyric read:<br />
How To <strong>Write</strong> A Finished Song Lyric,?)<br />
<strong>Write</strong> <strong>Away</strong>, p8, June 2019<br />
<strong>Write</strong> the Music:<br />
Melody, choosing the notes a vocalist sings for<br />
the lyrics in each song section.<br />
Chord Progression, the chords for each song<br />
section (chorus, verse, pre-chorus, bridge).<br />
Arrangement, the way an instrumentalist plays<br />
during each song section.<br />
This might be a:<br />
Basic Arrangement - voice and one instrument<br />
Band Arrangement - voice, guitar, piano, bass,<br />
drums<br />
Electronic Arrangement - voice, loops and<br />
beats, synthesizers and drum machines<br />
Recording The Song<br />
(From simple to more complex)<br />
Work Tape - rough audio recording.<br />
Often a work tape is used to communicate<br />
between co-writers while the song is being<br />
written (sent to you for feedback while the<br />
song is in progress) or to create a rough<br />
recording of a finished song. This can be as<br />
simple as an audio performance recorded on a<br />
smartphone.<br />
Video Performance of the Song,<br />
Co-writer singing and playing the song on<br />
video, suitable to release on social media or as<br />
a demo recording. Some video and audio editing<br />
is often required.<br />
Home Studio Recording<br />
Typically several instruments played one at a<br />
time, then mixed together. Sometimes a professional<br />
mixer or mastering engineer is hired<br />
to improve the quality of the final version.<br />
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Trevor Dimoff<br />
Professional Studio Recording<br />
The advantage to a professional studio is the<br />
quality of the final recording. It’s difficult to<br />
create a commercial quality recording without<br />
a professional studio recording or professional<br />
mixing and mastering.<br />
The disadvantage is price... costs include: studio<br />
time, a recording engineer (who records<br />
the song), a mixing engineer (who mixes all<br />
tracks together) and mastering engineer (who<br />
puts finishing touches on the final mix to make<br />
it ready for radio). In addition, it’s common to<br />
hire professional studio musicians who play<br />
and sing the parts on the recording.<br />
Your Next Step<br />
Think about your songwriting goals and your<br />
lyric writing skills. What can you offer to a<br />
potential co-writer?<br />
What skills do you need in a co-writing partner?<br />
What are your goals for your songs?<br />
Now it’s time to start actively looking for cowriters<br />
to work with….<br />
If you are learning how to write the music for<br />
your songs, you can find out more about the<br />
necessary skills and ways to learn them here:<br />
https://epicsongwriting.com/start-writingsongs/<br />
Trevor Dimoff is a songwriter and songwriting<br />
teacher at:<br />
https://epicsongwriting.com/<br />
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Freddie Mercury<br />
In a world where everything<br />
appears to becoming cheaper<br />
yet more disposable, I often<br />
wonder if the great pop artists of<br />
the 70's ever fully realised the<br />
longevity of their recordings. I<br />
wonder what Freddie mercury<br />
was thinking when he was in<br />
front of a studio mic laying down<br />
vocal takes that to this day, nearly<br />
50 years later are still played<br />
on high rotation around the<br />
world. I wonder if the raw emotion<br />
he exuded when he performed<br />
with Queen was a product<br />
of that understanding or<br />
whether he was just Freddie<br />
being Freddie. I personally think<br />
the latter. A true, genuine vocal<br />
artist capable of writing songs<br />
and creating performances that<br />
transcended normality into<br />
something truly breathtaking.<br />
So what makes Freddies performances<br />
so breathtaking?<br />
Today we break down three<br />
important attributes that I<br />
believe sets Freddie apart from<br />
all but the most elite of vocal<br />
stars.<br />
Firstly risk. With creativity comes<br />
risk. The more creative away<br />
from the known, the more risky.<br />
Freddies songs were very risky.<br />
The 70's were an interesting<br />
decade. Bouncing off the shoulders<br />
of the early studios from<br />
the 50's and the 60's, studios<br />
were now coming of age with<br />
large format consoles and 2" 24<br />
track tape machines. The record<br />
labels had unfathomable income<br />
because the only way to consume<br />
music is to buy it either on<br />
tape or record or listen on radio<br />
for which they still received royalties.<br />
Just like the movie industry,<br />
if a label saw massive potential,<br />
they could risk massive<br />
financial investment into them.<br />
Enter the supergroups.. Names<br />
like Fleetwood Mac, Pink Floyd,<br />
the Eagles and of course Queen<br />
emerged where they could<br />
spend a million dollars on 8<br />
songs.<br />
This combination of huge budgets<br />
and unbridled high quality<br />
studio tech allowed for both the<br />
labels and the artists to be very<br />
very creative. With this creativity<br />
comes an enormous risk. But<br />
with this risk comes a roll of the<br />
dice to virtual immortal greatness.<br />
Freddie mercury was hugely<br />
risky. It's easy to look back<br />
and assume that Bohemian<br />
Rhapsody always existed but<br />
remember, at some point, it<br />
began as a blank piece of paper<br />
on which Freddie wrote "scaramouche<br />
scaramouche... Thunder<br />
bolts of lightening". I can only<br />
imagine what a few suits at the<br />
label thought the first time they<br />
heard THAT idea.<br />
This leads me onto Freddies second<br />
unique trait...<br />
He appeared completely fearless.<br />
It takes a VERY confident<br />
person to write the songs he did<br />
and pitch them as the next greatest<br />
thing. Freddie is the ultimate<br />
expression of not giving one fk<br />
about what other people think<br />
about him. He was already openly<br />
gay in a decade when talking<br />
about "poofter bashing" was<br />
almost still acceptible. Maybe his<br />
resilience in his personal life<br />
made him resilient in his professional<br />
one to the point that he<br />
could swing way out where the<br />
average person on the street<br />
would be completely consumed<br />
with the opinions of others.<br />
And this leads me onto his third<br />
trait... Dynamics.<br />
His combination of being hyper<br />
creative and completely fearless<br />
allows him to go where very few<br />
singers can.... Into the world of<br />
absolute vulnerability. Freddie<br />
didn't just sing. He expressed<br />
emotion in a way few can. When<br />
you listen to his recordings,<br />
you'll hear up to three or four different<br />
emotions on each and<br />
every line. He has an intuition to<br />
move from whisper to full belt.<br />
His soft notes are gloriously soft<br />
then instantly he opens up into<br />
bright, hard twang then into<br />
what appears to be Opera then<br />
back to belting. And this degree<br />
of expression within all of his<br />
vocal lines are one huge component<br />
to his unique brilliance.<br />
Go to YouTube and search for<br />
Freddie mercury isolated vocal.<br />
Then listen. You'll hear it.<br />
This month, consider upping<br />
your risk by being super creative,<br />
completely fearless and<br />
expressive in your performances<br />
like never before and who<br />
knows, these may be the very<br />
attributes that launch you from<br />
your current plataeu into a whole<br />
new vocal realm.<br />
instagram.com/vocalpro.com.au<br />
http://vocalprocourses.com/<br />
http//www.facebook.com/vocalpro.com.au<br />
Paul Sykes, Vocal Coach<br />
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Freddie Mercury performs in 1980.<br />
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Songs Are Perform<br />
If the bard of Avon<br />
himself (William<br />
Shakespeare to you)<br />
was not above tailoring<br />
his works to play to the<br />
strengths of his best<br />
available actors, should<br />
we as songwriters be<br />
doing the same? After<br />
all, songs are intended to<br />
be performed, right?<br />
Are we giving our performer<br />
(perhaps ourselves?)<br />
something they<br />
can work with? Is it too<br />
far outside their comfort<br />
zone? Or worse yet, too<br />
far inside that well-worn<br />
path? Fundamental truth<br />
number one: songwriting…..in<br />
fact, all art,<br />
needs to evoke in its<br />
audience both a feeling<br />
of surprise, and one of<br />
familiarity. Their reaction<br />
should be “Wow, I<br />
never thought about it<br />
that way!” rather than<br />
“What the hell are you<br />
talking about?” (Having<br />
said that, it seems like<br />
the best art often starts<br />
them feeling the latter…<br />
..and gently leads them<br />
to the former, almost as<br />
if they have come to the<br />
logical conclusion on<br />
their own).<br />
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Bill Halloran<br />
ances...... Right?<br />
One could argue then<br />
that the bard is all wet.<br />
If we are inspired, in a<br />
flash of insight, to innermost<br />
thoughts and feelings<br />
that are at once<br />
unique and yet so brilliantly<br />
logical that we<br />
can’t wait to share them<br />
with our fellow humans…<br />
.is it REALLY going to<br />
matter much whether our<br />
singer finds them as<br />
comfortable as an old<br />
shoe? Shouldn’t our<br />
goal be for this lightning<br />
strike of clarity to stand<br />
on its own, regardless of<br />
who is singing it? Why<br />
would we tinker with<br />
transparency? It almost<br />
seems like cheapening it,<br />
like we’ve dragged in a<br />
new, irrelevant character<br />
just so her name will<br />
rhyme (“little sister Nell”<br />
in “Color Him Father” by<br />
the Winstons...a songwriting<br />
mess so bad that<br />
even having someone die<br />
in the song to drum up<br />
sympathy can’t save it…<br />
but I digress).<br />
The truth is somewhere<br />
in between. As it often<br />
is. First of all, let’s calm<br />
down, and consider<br />
whether we’ve just written<br />
“War and Peace”....<br />
or “Wooly Bully”. Then,<br />
while striving for this<br />
perfect clarity, let’s also<br />
strive for simplicity<br />
(something this author<br />
may occasionally forget!)<br />
What words, sections,<br />
notes can we trim? What<br />
lines are least essential<br />
to our message. If we’re<br />
not sure our singer can<br />
deliver this line with conviction<br />
(warning bells<br />
should go off, if you find<br />
yourself wondering<br />
“Would ANY singer feel<br />
good with this?”) go back<br />
and decide if that line<br />
can come out.<br />
Bottom line: If we can<br />
lead them to whatever<br />
beauty, truth and fun<br />
without them seeing us<br />
pulling the strings…<br />
thinking they’ve gotten<br />
there on their own… then<br />
we’ve created the magic<br />
potion! Good luck!!<br />
Cat<br />
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Mercury<br />
(Intro)<br />
Have you ever felt like you're going<br />
to fall?<br />
I felt like I should fly<br />
(Verse 1)<br />
I put on my spacesuit<br />
Said goodbye to my loved ones<br />
I guess I'll be on the news<br />
But it won't matter anyway<br />
(Chorus)<br />
Got a little close to the sun today<br />
Mercury's rising<br />
Mercury's rising,<br />
Got a little close to the sun today<br />
Mercury's rising<br />
Mercury's rising<br />
(Verse 2)<br />
I climbed in my spaceship<br />
And battened the hatches<br />
I took this bird for a spin<br />
But it won't matter anyway<br />
(Corus)<br />
Got a little close to the sun today<br />
Mercury's rising<br />
Mercury's rising,<br />
Got a little close to the sun today<br />
Mercury's rising<br />
Mercury's rising<br />
(Bridge)<br />
I can see the light<br />
Or is it the fire?<br />
I guess I'll find out soon enough,<br />
Climbing higher and higher<br />
The air getting lighter<br />
As blackness begins to engulf<br />
(Verse 3)<br />
I went for a spacewalk<br />
And I was not tethered<br />
Didn't intend to return<br />
Cos it won't matter anyway<br />
(Chorus)<br />
Got a little close to the sun today<br />
Mercury's rising<br />
Mercury's rising,<br />
Got a little close to the sun today<br />
Mercury's rising<br />
Mercury's rising<br />
(Outro)<br />
Crash landed<br />
Smashed in a wall<br />
Tried to fly<br />
I was destined to fall<br />
Written by Simon Wright<br />
(June 2019)<br />
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Simon Wright<br />
’s Rising<br />
Mercury’s Rising – A Simon<br />
Wright Lyric<br />
This lyric has got nothing to do with<br />
Freddie Mercury. The theme of the lyric<br />
would possibly be very different, given<br />
the title, if it was! Mercury’s Rising was<br />
influenced in a way though by another<br />
legendary rock vocalist, the late great<br />
Chris Cornell. I’d been listening to<br />
Cornell’s catalogue of songs on Spotify<br />
and, stylistically, it’s influenced this lyric.<br />
It’s his voice that I heard in my head as I<br />
was penning it.<br />
About the lyric<br />
At the moment this is just a lyric. I’d love<br />
to get it turned into a song. If any musicians<br />
out there would like to collaborate<br />
then please get in touch with me.<br />
About Simon Wright<br />
Simon is an Irish lyric writer who lives in<br />
Scotland. He collaborates with musicians<br />
across the world to turn his lyrics into<br />
songs. Check out his website:<br />
www.LyricSlinger.co.uk<br />
and follow<br />
@TheLyricSlinger on Twitter<br />
As I was listening to Chris Cornell’s<br />
songs I experienced a mix of emotions;<br />
the pleasure of hearing his beautiful<br />
voice and music, and the melancholy of<br />
knowing that he chose to take his own<br />
life. Despite all that talent he had a<br />
moment where the weight of the world,<br />
the gravity, became too much to take.<br />
I was also influenced by remembering<br />
someone from many years ago who<br />
crashed his car into a wall as a consequence<br />
of the depression that a marriage<br />
breakup caused. Thankfully he survived<br />
and has begun to rebuild his life, bit by<br />
bit.<br />
So. quite a heavy topic for a lyric. but I<br />
can see the chorus being quite memorable<br />
accompanied by a rock riff. And I<br />
like the story that I’ve built in the verses<br />
and bridge, with the astronaut metaphor.<br />
I’m looking for musicians to turn this into<br />
a song.<br />
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What’s In<br />
WHAT’S IN A LYRIC!<br />
You may as well ask “How long is a piece of<br />
string?” or “How do you describe ‘colour’ to<br />
a blindperson?” Because in my own estimation,<br />
there is no definitive answer, except to say<br />
“<strong>Write</strong> it the way you feel it!” I suppose that’s how<br />
it begins for most poets and lyricists.<br />
So what makes a good lyric? Like a chef preparing<br />
a gourmet meal, it all depends on the constituents<br />
(in my case the words) and how they’re<br />
assembled. Just like the art of cuisine, practice<br />
makes perfect and once you learn the basics, you<br />
can diversify and experiment to your heart’s content.<br />
Over the years, I’ve developed my own technique<br />
for writing song lyrics as well as composing<br />
the music, which for me is a blessing in disguise<br />
because I can meld both words and<br />
music into acomplete experience.<br />
Although lyric writing can be free and fluent, in<br />
which the song is built from an idea; a particular<br />
experience or sometimes a political expression,<br />
when it comes to writing for musical theatre, there<br />
is also another discipline which must be learned,<br />
‘characterisation.’ Many of the most successful<br />
musicals are based on plays, novels or motion pictures<br />
i.e. Shakespeare’s Romeo & Juliet became<br />
‘West SideStory’, Shaw’s Pygmalion turned into<br />
‘My Fair Lady’, Molnar’s Lilliom becam ‘Carousel’,<br />
Gaston Leroux’s famous novel was scored into<br />
‘Phantom of the Opera’, and Victor Hugo’s ‘Les<br />
Miserables’ etc. In the majority of cases the leading<br />
roles are played by great singers, supported in<br />
turn by a large chorus, which in turn calls for<br />
great musical numbers. The songs in these musicals<br />
are generally performed by many (or few)<br />
characters, as solo/duet presentations, or a group<br />
and in a variety of disciplines; to portray grief,<br />
love, happiness, fun, sarcasm or any other way<br />
that communicates emotion.<br />
If you are serious in pursuing a songwriting<br />
career may I suggest you get hold of a book entitled<br />
‘<br />
Song by Song, published 1984 by Ross Anderson,<br />
also buy a copy of Roget’s Thesaurus (my bible)<br />
when you’re looking for alternative words to<br />
express a particular feeling or emotion.<br />
As for lyric writing, ‘Stage Musicals’ are the path I<br />
have followed for the many hundreds of songs<br />
I’ve composed over the years and in way of explanation,<br />
here is a brief synopsis of how I developed<br />
the song lyric for the Lewis Caroll’s character<br />
‘Alice’ in new version of ‘Alice in Wonderland’.<br />
NOTES:<br />
1) As the story tells, Alice is sat under a tree reading<br />
a book, when suddenly a white rabbit hurries<br />
by. The story develops from this moment.<br />
2) When she arrives in Wonderland her first<br />
thoughts are “Who in the world am I?<br />
3) The song needs to pursue this idea i.e Is this all<br />
in her mind or is she daydreaming? Are all of<br />
these characters just a figment of her imagination.<br />
4) Could it be that there are two Alices and if so,<br />
which is the real one? “Am I just plain little Alice,<br />
or am I Alice in Wonderland?” Use this as the<br />
closing line in each verse.<br />
5) The opening line could be “Is this all in my<br />
imagination?”<br />
2nd line “xxxxxxxx”<br />
3rd line “Could this be some wild hallucination?<br />
4th line “xxxxxxxxxxxxx”<br />
5th line “Is all this world created in my head?”<br />
6th line “Am I only dreaming and soundly sleeping<br />
in my bed?<br />
(etc to the closing phrase)<br />
Lines 7&8 “Am I just Alice, plain little Alice, or am<br />
I Alice in Wonderland?”<br />
This is the basic format for this song. The completed<br />
work took me a few more days (& nights)<br />
(Sung by Alice)<br />
ALICE IN WONDERLAND<br />
Is it all in my imagination<br />
Am I playing part of someone else<br />
Could this be some wild hallucination<br />
Of how I want to see myself<br />
Is all this world created in my head<br />
Am I awake, or soundly sleeping in my bed<br />
Will I ever really understand<br />
Am I just Alice, plain little Alice<br />
Or am I Alice in Wonderland<br />
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A Lyric?<br />
* Could there be a simple explanation<br />
For these pictures playing with my mind<br />
Maybe they are all my own creation<br />
From childhood days I’ve left behind<br />
Would it be wrong to live inside my dream<br />
A private place where every cat would have it’s<br />
cream<br />
Where I’d never care, or understand<br />
If I were Alice, plain littleAlice<br />
Or I were Alice in Wonderland<br />
* Sometimes when I’m feeling sentimental<br />
I’ll imagine there’s another me<br />
And my mind can be experimental<br />
On who I’d really like to be<br />
If I could choose from other times gone by<br />
Perhaps I’d find there was no one as good as I<br />
Maybe then I’d come to understand<br />
Although I’m Alice, plain little Alice<br />
I’m really Alice in Wonderland<br />
© ALICE IN WONDERLAND<br />
(ONE OF 9 ORIGINAL SONGS IN THIS PRODUC-<br />
TION)<br />
Links to Tyne Music productions:<br />
https://tynemusic.com/original-sheet-music-andmusic-albums<br />
https://www.facebook.com/tynesider<br />
https://www.facebook.com/dennis.a.westgate<br />
DENNIS A. WESTGATE<br />
Note: The original song only consisted of one<br />
verse. After the 2014 production I decided to add<br />
another two verses to make it more commercial<br />
for solo presentation<br />
Links to Tyne Music productions:<br />
(This is the completed version as performed by<br />
the ‘We Are Theatre’ company in the Joseph<br />
Rowntree Theatre - York n 2013, the Spa Theatre -<br />
Bridlington 2014 and returned by popular request<br />
to the Rowntree Theatre - York in 2018)<br />
.<br />
http://www.wearetheatre.co.uk/alice-in-wonderland.html<br />
https://tynemusic.com/original-sheet-music-andmusic-albums<br />
https://www.facebook.com/tynesider<br />
https://www.facebook.com/dennis.a.westgate<br />
LINK TO DENNIS’S MUSIC:<br />
https://sellfy.com/tyneonlinemusic<br />
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Put Your Heart<br />
Do you write from an idea?<br />
Do you write from a title?<br />
Or do you just write what you<br />
feel?<br />
You can do all three... You can<br />
write what you feel about an<br />
idea from a title... And so<br />
many hit songs have been<br />
written like that... But ask<br />
yourself... The ones that hit<br />
you in the heart, how where<br />
they written?<br />
Usually it was someone who<br />
sat down with pen and paper<br />
and maybe a guitar or piano<br />
and the ‘Words’ came to<br />
them... Sure maybe they<br />
tweaked it afterwards... Or<br />
maybe a co-writer looking<br />
from another angle saw a way<br />
to make it "better"... But the<br />
essence of the song that hits<br />
someone's heart is what<br />
makes it powerful .. and what<br />
is that? It's what YOUR heart<br />
wrote...<br />
Most writers will tell you their<br />
best songs came together in<br />
the shortest time... Yes most if<br />
not all songs need crafting to<br />
reach their potential... But if<br />
you can just let go and let the<br />
song write itself and just get<br />
out the way of the song then<br />
your heart can shine<br />
through...<br />
Freddie was right, he was<br />
always honest and true and<br />
because of that anyone could<br />
feel what he wrote and find<br />
something of themselves in<br />
there too... And like he says,<br />
"if you see it , it's there" why?<br />
Because it's the heart you are<br />
seeing, regardless of the<br />
meaning it's the feeling that<br />
you are translating...<br />
So... Make sure that while you<br />
agonise over the words you<br />
choose and the melodies you<br />
write in your song craft, prioritise<br />
the heart and the emotion...<br />
Remember, you rarely remember<br />
everything someone<br />
does... and often forget what<br />
they say... But... You always<br />
remember how they make you<br />
feel.<br />
Keep writing, stay creative<br />
and always give your heart...<br />
It's the only one in the world<br />
quite like it<br />
Paul deMarco is a UK based<br />
Singer, Songwriter and<br />
Producer<br />
You can find out more from<br />
www.pauldemarcomusic.com<br />
and get a free download of his<br />
latest single "Chasing Your<br />
Ghost"<br />
Find him on Facebook at<br />
www.facebook.com/pauldema<br />
rcomusic<br />
And join the group<br />
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F M<br />
R E<br />
E R<br />
D C<br />
D U<br />
I R<br />
E Y<br />
Barcelona<br />
I had this perfect dream<br />
Un sueno me envolvio<br />
This dream was me and you<br />
Tal vez esta aqui<br />
I want all the world to see<br />
Un instinto me guiaba<br />
A miracle sensation<br />
My guide and inspiration<br />
Now my dream is slowly coming true<br />
The wind is a gentle breeze<br />
EI me hablo de ti<br />
The bells are ringing out<br />
EI canto vuela<br />
They're calling us together<br />
Guiding us forever<br />
Wish my dream would never go away<br />
Barcelona<br />
It was the first time that we met<br />
Barcelona<br />
How can I forget<br />
The moment that you stepped into the room<br />
You took my breath away<br />
Barcelona<br />
La musica vibro<br />
Barcelona<br />
Yella nos unio<br />
And if God is willing<br />
We will meet again<br />
Someday<br />
Let the songs begin<br />
Dejalo nacer<br />
Let the music play<br />
Ah<br />
Make the voices sing<br />
Nace un gran amor<br />
Start the celebration<br />
Ven a mi<br />
And cry<br />
Grita<br />
Come…<br />
Freddie Mercury. Montserrat Caballe<br />
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Freddie Mercury<br />
Born September 5th 1946 in Stone<br />
Town, Zanzibar and named Farrokh<br />
Bulsara, his parents had emigrated<br />
from India to Zanzibar where his father<br />
worked as a clerk for the British government.<br />
As a child he attended a boarding<br />
school in Panchgani, Maharashtra State,<br />
India. He was artistically inclined from a<br />
very young age, and formed a band in which<br />
he played piano. When Zanzibar became<br />
part of the independant country of Tanzania<br />
in 1964 he moved with his family to Feltham,<br />
England. He studied graphic art and design<br />
at Ealing Technical College and School of<br />
Art (now part of the Universty of West<br />
London) from where he graduated in 1969.<br />
Heavily influenced by hard edged bluesbased<br />
rock acts such as Cream and Jimi<br />
Hendrix he began singing with bands in<br />
London. He became friends with guitarist<br />
Brian May and drummer Roger Taylor from<br />
the band Smile, and in 1970 when the bands<br />
lead singer quit Bulsara replaced him. He<br />
then changed the bands name to Queen and<br />
his own name to Freddie Mercury. Bassist<br />
John Deacon joined them in 1971. Queen<br />
incorporated elements from both heavy<br />
metal and glam rock, they debuted on<br />
record in 1973 with Queen, followed in 1974<br />
by Queen II. Despite their blend of vocal<br />
harmonies and layered virtuosic guitar<br />
work, Queen failed to attract much notice<br />
beyond the UK. However in 1974 the album<br />
Sheer Heart Attack shot up the International<br />
charts, and in 1975 A Night At The Opera<br />
sold even better. . The band’s ambitious<br />
approach to both songwriting and studio<br />
production was epitomized by the latter<br />
album’s mock-operatic single Bohemian<br />
Rhapsody, one of a number of Queen compositions<br />
written primarily by Freddie<br />
Mercury. The song spent nine weeks at the<br />
top of the British singles chart, and its<br />
accompanying promotional film helped the<br />
music industry recognise its future in video.<br />
Spectacular success followed in 1977 with<br />
We Are The Champions and We Will Rock<br />
You, both of which became ubiquitous<br />
anthems at sporting events in Britain and<br />
the United States.<br />
By the early 1980’s Queen had become an<br />
International phonomenon, drawing attention<br />
from their elabourately staged performances<br />
in enormous venues, strutting<br />
around the stage in outrageous costumes,<br />
and Freddie effortlessly commanding audiences<br />
of tens of thousands of fans.<br />
Although Queen’s commercial fortunes had<br />
begun to wane by mid decade, the band<br />
arguably reached its pinnacle as a live act<br />
with a stellar performance at the charity<br />
concert Live Aid in 1985. That same year<br />
Freddie released his solo Mr Bad Guy taking<br />
inspiration from disco music.<br />
Freddie later appeared on the sound track of<br />
Dave Clark’s science-fiction musical Time in<br />
1986 and teamed with Spanish soprano<br />
Montserrat Caballe for the semi-operatic<br />
album Barcelona in 1988.<br />
In 1991 Mercury, who had engaged in relationships<br />
with both men and women,<br />
announced that he had been diagnosed with<br />
AIDS. He died a day later from complications<br />
related to the disease. Until shortly before<br />
his death, Mercury had continued to record<br />
with Queen, and he was posthumously featured<br />
on the band’s final album, Made in<br />
Heaven (1995).<br />
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Freddie<br />
Singles Dis<br />
05/09/46 -<br />
1973 I Can Hear Music/Going Back<br />
1985 Living On My Own, Love Me Like<br />
There’s No Tomorrow<br />
1988 The Golden Boy<br />
1992 Re-release, Guide Me Home/How Ca<br />
I Go On, In My Defence, Re-relese,<br />
Barcelona<br />
2006 Re-mix Sunshine People, Love Kills<br />
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Freddie Mercury<br />
ercury<br />
cography<br />
1984 Love Kills, I Was Born To Love<br />
You, Made In Heaven<br />
1986 Time, The Great Pretender<br />
1987 Barcelona<br />
1989 Guide Me Home/How Can I Go On<br />
n 1993 Re-release, The Great Pretender<br />
Living On My Own<br />
2000 Guide Me Home<br />
2019 Time Waits For No One<br />
24/11/91<br />
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Miss High Roller<br />
Verse:<br />
There was a showgirl from Vegas<br />
Her casino smile is so vivacious<br />
She knows how to strut her stuff<br />
That sweet lady can't get enough<br />
Her red velvet dress and high heeled shoes<br />
And yes, she really sings the blues<br />
Here she comes<br />
It's Miss High Roller<br />
Verse:<br />
She got a 1958 Oldsmobile<br />
She was a winner and she's ready to deal<br />
All she really wants is a fine looking man<br />
That's the one she really understand<br />
Here she comes<br />
It's Miss High Roller<br />
Bridge:<br />
She's fallin’ in love with the man she love<br />
They fit together like a hand in glove<br />
Lord knows she's ready to rock this world<br />
Miss High Roller is a red hot girl<br />
Verse:<br />
Her body rollin' like a roulette wheel<br />
Her sexy style are looks to kill<br />
And when the party's over, she's ready to ride<br />
Fellas, you better run, but you cannot hide<br />
Here she comes<br />
It's Miss High Roller<br />
© 2018 - Shawn Adam Williams<br />
Click link to listen to song...<br />
Shawn Adam Williams was born and raised in Atlanta, Georgia on January 23, 1987.<br />
After the loss of his mother, Patricia Williams-Perdue who died of bladder cancer, he decided to<br />
move on. He suffered from anger issues, and types of depression which led him to listen to a lot<br />
of music when he was young.<br />
His passion for music includes rockabilly, roots, blues, gospel, and soul. His rockabilly influences<br />
are: Carl Perkins, Jack Scott, Eddie Cochran, and Jerry Lee Lewis, his blues influences<br />
are: BB King, Buddy Guy, Screamin' Jay Hawkins, Solomon Burke, Gary Moore, and Stevie Ray<br />
Vaughan.<br />
He became a singer, lyricist, and composer to fulfil his spirits and dreams of becoming a true<br />
vocalist, and that's why he speaks the truth through his songs.<br />
His lyrics represent his musical culture, when he focused to become the best lyricist and singer<br />
he could. Also, he has been nominated for four Josie Music Awards, two IMEA Awards, a Gran<br />
Royale Music Award Nomination, an LDM Radio Award Nomination and also, 5 KICMA Award<br />
Nominations. He scored numerous songs on the independent charts. And the rest is history!<br />
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Lady Of The Dead<br />
In time we were born, she takes it all with her<br />
and the nights rooster, was a crow,<br />
The day's whiled away, while we took our<br />
chances and played<br />
at Le Dia de los Muertos parade<br />
In time you will see, through the ashes of the<br />
storm,<br />
though at the time, it makes no sense at all<br />
though everyone must go, like the wilted roses<br />
who know<br />
and I make my peace with the sky<br />
and I make my peace with the sky<br />
and I make my peace with sky<br />
and I make my peace with the sky<br />
Come on baby, come on make you shine<br />
Gonna bring you to me just for one more time<br />
Its the dia de los muertos parade,<br />
say your game, put your hands together come<br />
and party with me<br />
you know, In time we were born,<br />
she takes it all with her<br />
and the nights rooster, was a crow,<br />
but the day's whiled away, whilst we took our<br />
chances and played<br />
at Le Dia de los Muertos parade<br />
you know, In time we were born,<br />
she takes it all with her<br />
and the nights rooster, was a crow,<br />
but the day's whiled away, whilst we took our<br />
chances and played<br />
at Le Dia de los Muertos parade X 3 oo oo oo<br />
In time you will see, through the ashes of the<br />
storm,<br />
though at the time, it makes no sense at all<br />
though everyone must go, like the wilted roses<br />
who know<br />
and I make my peace with the sky<br />
Credits<br />
released July 23, 2019<br />
Music, lyrics and vocals - Kerri Layton<br />
Drums - Matt Dean<br />
Bass - Jordan Brown<br />
Keys - Benjamin Croft<br />
Baritone Sax - Lottie B<br />
Mastering - Graham Waller<br />
Photography - Gigi Gianella<br />
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Kerri Layton<br />
Kerri Layton is a singer songwriter and performing<br />
artist who lives in East London. The 'Vocal Priestess<br />
and Hoodoo Woman' has earned herself a great<br />
reputation on the live jazz and blues circuit as an<br />
enigmatic live vocalist and entertainer, performing<br />
for a wide range of events and festivals and at some<br />
of London's most prestigious venues such as The<br />
BBC, Alexandra Palace, Hackney Empire, taking<br />
slots on BBC Radio, performing at Glastonbury<br />
Festival and is an in demand singer on the international<br />
private event circuit with her creations at<br />
Dixiebird Records.<br />
Lady of the Dead is Kerri’s brand new single,<br />
recorded in London and features her line up of talented<br />
jazz musicians.<br />
Matt Dean - Drums, Jordan Brown - Fretless bass<br />
and Guitar, Lottie B - Sax, Ben Croft - Keyboards<br />
I wrote this song for a live show at Alexandra Palace<br />
back in 2016, it was a Day of the Dead Parade<br />
which we had the pleasure of creatively directing as<br />
well as performing in. The whole project carried a<br />
weight of personal semblance to it as 2016 was one<br />
of those tragic years where a lot of people very<br />
close to me died, my aunt was diagnosed and later<br />
died of cancer, my best friend suddenly died on a<br />
night out and an old family friend, as well as other<br />
personal tragedies, it was the year from hell. We<br />
also lost a lot of influential artists that year, David<br />
Bowie, Debbie Reynolds, Carrie Fisher, George<br />
Michael, the list went on.<br />
This song really gave me chance to use the Mexican<br />
tradition as a way to explore the grief I was experiencing<br />
with different eyes. The Dia Del Las Muertos<br />
(Day of the Dead) is an ancient tradition which honors<br />
the ancestors and the dead by gathering in<br />
peaceful reflection, making offerings of sweet<br />
bread, cakes, and flowers on shrines. The Bond<br />
movie made it seem like some huge annual celebration<br />
in Mexico City, which of course it wasn't, but is<br />
now and Alexandra Palace wanted to recreate it. I<br />
got the call to work on the project and somehow it<br />
all tied in very personally to what I had been experiencing.<br />
In fact in the last 4 years prior to 2016 I had<br />
lost nearly 20 friends and close family members to<br />
various tragedies. The song really meant a lot to me<br />
and I held all of them very close to me in my heart<br />
as I was writing it, it really gave me chance to sit<br />
with the sadness and turn it into something completely<br />
new.<br />
I wanted the song not to be about loss and sadness,<br />
I wanted it to be about life itself, which is ironic,<br />
given the title of the track, 'Lady of the Dead'.<br />
The opening lyric for the song (the one you see<br />
here) is my favourite one. The start of this composition<br />
had to honor the essence of the veil between<br />
the spirit world and ours 'In time we were born' It literally<br />
means, you had to wait a very long time for<br />
your turn, and it's your turn to live now!<br />
'She takes it all with her' this literally means when<br />
we leave, to depart Earth and go home from wherever<br />
we came, the power that is mother earth, nature,<br />
re absorbing the energy of of physical bodies, It literally<br />
means, you leave your body but your spirit<br />
departs.<br />
'And the night's rooster was a crow' The symbolism<br />
of the birds is a nod to the shamans and the aztec<br />
culture of using totem animals to gain a deeper perspective<br />
into an aspect of life we may need help<br />
with.<br />
The crow is mysterious, the shape shifter, in alchemy<br />
the crow is used to describe the freeing of the<br />
Phoenix Spirit from the bounds of the physical, in<br />
direct contrast to the rooster who is by nature<br />
strong and is associated with rising and shining!<br />
I used it in this instance to create a contrast<br />
between what we perceive to be physical life and<br />
the transcending into another energetic form,<br />
whether that be a memory, love, or the actual spirit<br />
world itself.<br />
Basically, in a nutshell, these lyrics mean us coming<br />
from some other place, a place we have been waiting<br />
a long time to come here from, some may call it<br />
heaven or the other side, and our experience here is<br />
not what we think it is, and that somehow made me<br />
feel at peace having lost so many loved ones, the<br />
thought that this wasn't their only existence, the<br />
thought that that they were here living life and now<br />
they are off flying into another dimension, and it<br />
wasn't just the end, it was only the beginning.<br />
https://www.facebook.com/kerrilaytonmusic<br />
www.kerrilayton.com and<br />
www.dixiebirdrecords.com<br />
Photo Day of the Dead shot Gigi Giannella 2016)<br />
Photo band shot Daniella Fleckenstein 2018)<br />
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Time To Rise<br />
By Kevin Gullickson - Radio Drive<br />
TIME TO RISE<br />
Break the mold you thought was you<br />
Fit the pieces into something new<br />
Something new<br />
Take the fragments of your life<br />
Broken shattered, cut you like a knife<br />
Like a knife<br />
Let it sharpen, let it bleed<br />
Let it bring out everything you need<br />
What you need<br />
It’s time to rise<br />
It’s time to rise<br />
Way up to the sky<br />
It’s time to rise<br />
It’s time to rise<br />
Spread your wings and fly<br />
Life is flowing, life is change<br />
Nothing constant ever stays the same<br />
Stays the same<br />
Never think your life is trash<br />
Look and see the beauty from the ash<br />
From the ash<br />
CHORUS<br />
Wake up, get out<br />
It's time to go<br />
Ready or not, it's time to show all you've got<br />
All you've got<br />
CHORUS<br />
All words & music by Kevin Gullickson (BMI)<br />
c2018<br />
Links To Radio Drive<br />
http://www.radiodrive.net<br />
http://www.facebook.com/radiodrive<br />
http://www.twitter.com/radiodrivemusic<br />
http://www.youtube.com/RadioDriveMusic<br />
http://www.instagram.com/radio_drive-<br />
How it came together:<br />
Back in 2014-2015 I was riding the wave of<br />
success with my song "A Taste of Heaven". I<br />
was getting massive radio play, topping indie<br />
charts, winning awards and nominations and<br />
getting international attention. I had a band<br />
playing local clubs. I was working with a<br />
management/booking agency helping to<br />
advance my career. They were setting up a<br />
3-4 month European tour for the summer of<br />
2015. I was working with a music attorney in<br />
New York City, shopping my music to labels.<br />
Things were going great. Then everything<br />
came to an end in May/June 2015. The tour<br />
never happened. The band members went<br />
their own ways, some getting new jobs and<br />
commitments and had to step down. Then<br />
worst of all, my brother died of cancer in<br />
June 2015. Everything crashed. My life<br />
crashed. I had to step back and reassess my<br />
life and see how I could put it back together.<br />
I didn't sing or play guitar for about a year. I<br />
didn't write any songs. I didn't know if I could<br />
even write another song, let along release<br />
another album. I was in a major rut and didn't<br />
know how to get out. Then my wife started to<br />
encourage me to keep writing, to keep going,<br />
to keep following my dream. So I did. Slowly<br />
in 2017, I began singing, playing guitar and<br />
writing songs. In April 2018 I released my<br />
album "She Colors My World".<br />
The song "Time To Rise" along with others on<br />
my album "She Colors My World" came out of<br />
this time of rebuilding my life. In the song I<br />
wrote: "Break the mold you thought was you,<br />
fit the pieces into something new". This mold<br />
I refer to was my expectations, which had all<br />
crashed and were broken. Nothing I thought<br />
would happen, actually happened. That shat-<br />
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Radio Drive<br />
tered my life. I had to take the shattered<br />
pieces of my life and put them back<br />
together. It was painful. The shattered<br />
pieces were sharp and I bled. But I persisted<br />
and kept moving forward. I'm a firm<br />
believer that all things work together for<br />
good. There will be tears, but there will be<br />
joy soon enough. Life is constantly changing<br />
and I needed to go where the peace<br />
was flowing, or directing me on the road to<br />
healing. I knew I had to keep pressing on.<br />
And I did. This song "Time To Rise" captures<br />
that belief and the process I went<br />
through.<br />
Radio Drive is an Alternative Pop Rock<br />
band featuring Kevin Gullickson. As the<br />
engine behind Radio Drive, Kevin has won<br />
international awards and nominations for<br />
his songs and music videos. The music of<br />
Radio Drive is being aired on radio around<br />
the world alongside major artists and is<br />
receiving rave reviews by music critics.<br />
He has been featured on web zines and<br />
radio shows in Europe, Canada and the<br />
USA.<br />
Kevin’s music has landed on charts on<br />
indie stations around the world, including<br />
Canada, Germany, the UK and the South<br />
Pacific. His music has been used on shows<br />
airing on Animal Planet, National<br />
Geographic, Comedy Central, Fox<br />
Channels, History Channel, Spike TV and<br />
Discovery Channel in the USA and TV programs<br />
in England, Mexico, New Zealand<br />
and Australia.<br />
Kevin’s 2014 release of “A Taste of<br />
Heaven” was raved about by critics and<br />
received massive radio play on indie stations<br />
around the world, winning awards<br />
and nominations.<br />
In mid <strong>August</strong> 2015 Kevin finished a project<br />
with internationally recognized producer,<br />
Stuart Epps. Stuart has worked<br />
with some of the most influential artists in<br />
music, including George Harrison, Bill<br />
Wyman, Jimmy Page, Elton John, Oasis<br />
and more. Kevin now has the honor of<br />
being listed among the artists Stuart has<br />
worked with. The result is a magnificent<br />
song entitled “Humanity”.<br />
In 2017 Kevin was chosen by BEM Wireless<br />
to endorse their products. Currently Kevin<br />
has engaged in a European radio campaign<br />
and is receiving extensive radio play<br />
of his music and in September and<br />
October 2017 “Humanity” has been in the<br />
Top 20 on the ToP INDéCOUVERTES—<br />
Official European Independent Music<br />
Chart and in October has landed at #2.<br />
In April 2018 Kevin<br />
released his 5th full<br />
album titled “She<br />
Colors My World”,<br />
mastered by Robert<br />
L. Smith at Defy<br />
Recordings (credits<br />
include David Bowie,<br />
Aerosmith, Paul<br />
McCartney, just to<br />
name a few).<br />
Immediately songs from<br />
this new CD have been<br />
receiving international<br />
attention, with<br />
three already<br />
receiving<br />
awards from<br />
the<br />
Akademia<br />
Music<br />
Awards.<br />
Currently,<br />
in 2019<br />
Kevin is<br />
finishing a<br />
video for<br />
his single<br />
“Sweet<br />
Thing”<br />
from the<br />
album<br />
“She<br />
Colors My<br />
World”<br />
along with<br />
a new CD<br />
titled “In The<br />
Light”,<br />
scheduled for<br />
release late<br />
summer 2019.<br />
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Winds o<br />
by The<br />
Winds of Change<br />
There’s a picture on your wall of a happy<br />
little boy<br />
Rosy cheeked and smiling as he holds his<br />
favourite toy<br />
Beaming at the camera unsure what’s<br />
going on<br />
All he knows in his young life is parents<br />
love and fun<br />
His bright eyes twinkle what do they see<br />
Do they see the future or wonder what<br />
will be<br />
Small child playing on the sand holding a<br />
balloon<br />
Gust of wind pulls it from his grasp he<br />
feels his life’s in ruins<br />
Could anything be worse than that<br />
What on earth could be worse than that<br />
Chorus<br />
There’s a cold wind blowing and it’s coming<br />
soon<br />
Doesn’t matter if you wrap up warm<br />
Not a chance that you’ll escape the storm<br />
Winds of change mean too much damage<br />
done<br />
Growing up you find how much your<br />
vision starts to change<br />
Watching through an adult’s eyes things<br />
don’t look the same<br />
Don’t you wish it was like when you were<br />
young<br />
Did you hope that what you saw would<br />
come to pass<br />
Looking back through twilight years only<br />
brings you pain Winds of Change<br />
The things you wish that you had done<br />
haunt you yet again<br />
Don’t blame yourself for what is not your<br />
fault<br />
Don’t take the blame for what is not your<br />
fault<br />
www.theVillage.me.uk<br />
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The Village<br />
f Change<br />
Village<br />
I've chosen the title song from my current<br />
album Winds of Change.<br />
My initial inspiration for the song was an<br />
old picture that my mum showed me of me<br />
as a very young child holding a bouncy<br />
ball. It was a photograph that was obviously<br />
posed in a professional photographer's<br />
studio. It set me thinking that if the picture<br />
was not of me but of a random little<br />
boy how did his life turn out.<br />
I talk firstly about the innocence of fun and<br />
childhood and then say that when everyone<br />
grows up things change and not necessarily<br />
for the better. Hence the lyric<br />
hinting at a change by stating that "there is<br />
a cold wind blowing, and it's coming way<br />
too soon".<br />
The spirit of Syd Barrett, Robyn Hitchcock<br />
and Andy Partridge permeate the music of<br />
pink sock wearing trilby hatted troubadour<br />
Phil Matthews a.k.a. the Village. The<br />
Village is a magical place for outsiders and<br />
oddballs.<br />
Phil has built up a following around the<br />
Midlands live circuit in UK winning hearts<br />
and minds with his performances.<br />
Phil has written and performed with many<br />
bands over the years and the Village is his<br />
latest alter ego, with his music played on<br />
hundreds of radio stations worldwide and<br />
his album tracks streamed and downloaded<br />
thousands of times, while Always<br />
On Her Mind and Secret Garden from the<br />
album Carnival of Fools have both enjoyed<br />
lengthy spells at the top of the British folk<br />
rock chart compiled by N1M.com, and currently<br />
has 4 albums available.<br />
www.theVillage.me.uk<br />
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The Riv<br />
The River City<br />
A city that rose to empire might<br />
Raging fire falls from the darkened night<br />
Strike for time, strike for gold<br />
Strike with steel they never grow old<br />
Birds on towers watch over this Scouse land<br />
Raise your hand if you know the band<br />
Raise your hand if you know the band.<br />
Chorus<br />
This River City flows through my mind<br />
Around each corner see what you find<br />
Reflected light on the flowing tide<br />
Waterfront, three graces, maritime pride.<br />
Waterfront, three graces, maritime pride.<br />
Verse 2<br />
History is past the future shines<br />
Buildings rise for educated minds<br />
Daylight nightlife hear the sounds<br />
Colours fly above opposing grounds<br />
A city where you are never alone<br />
Come walk with me my Liverpool home.<br />
Repeat chorus<br />
The historical meaning of the lyrics<br />
A city that rose to empire might<br />
( Liverpool became the second most important<br />
city behind London<br />
in the time of Queen Victoria).<br />
Raging fire falls from the darkened night.<br />
(The partial destruction of the city in WWII)<br />
Strike for time,<br />
(unions striking for a shorter working week)<br />
strike for gold<br />
(Unions striking for constant pay rises)<br />
Strike with steel they never grow old<br />
(A warning for young people of Liverpool<br />
against carrying a knife)<br />
Birds on towers watch over this Scouse<br />
land.<br />
(The Liver Birds above the Royal Liver building)<br />
Raise your hand if you know the band.<br />
(Beatles – obviously)<br />
Raise your hand if you know the band.<br />
This River City flows through my mind<br />
Around each corner see what you find<br />
Reflected light on the flowing tide<br />
(The River Mersey)<br />
Waterfront, three graces, maritime pride.<br />
(Three Graces consist of the Royal Liver<br />
Building,<br />
The Cunard Building and the Port of<br />
Liverpool Building).<br />
Waterfront, three graces, maritime pride.<br />
History is past the future shines<br />
(The city rising out of the dark times into<br />
where it is today)<br />
Buildings rise for educated minds<br />
(The buildings being but for students)<br />
Daylight nightlife hear the sounds<br />
(The thriving nightlife within the city)<br />
Colours fly above opposing grounds.<br />
(Goodinson and Anfield. Liverpool and<br />
Everton FC)<br />
A city where you are never alone.<br />
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U1UIZVg<br />
8zSU&feature=youtu.be<br />
How to introduce myself?<br />
Well, my name is Colin B Leonard and class<br />
myself as a Paranormal Thriller writer and<br />
lyricist. I have been told my writing style is<br />
descriptive aligned with a methodical<br />
approach to historical facts in both writing<br />
novels and lyrics. My style, combined withwhat<br />
one can call an imaginative mind has<br />
enabled me to create a brand along with a<br />
unique voice. (I wrote with enjoyment until I<br />
was informed I had a unique voice, now I<br />
write with trepidation all the while hoping<br />
that voice remains).<br />
I married my wife Julie in 1984. We are still<br />
happily married (yes my love I have written<br />
it) and together we have three adult boys. I<br />
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Colin B Leonard<br />
er City<br />
work full time in the funeral industry and for<br />
the Merseyside and Sefton Police Service<br />
carrying out duties for the coroner. My latest<br />
novel, ‘The Case of the Incessant Jack<br />
the Ripper’ is derived from actual crime<br />
scenes attended. The modern day murders<br />
within the novel have been compiled from<br />
many to ensure anonymity of any actual<br />
murder.<br />
My venture into the world of lyric writing<br />
arrived when singer/songwriter and former<br />
co-worker Joe Rogerson requested of me to<br />
write him lyrics about the city of Liverpool.<br />
Joe (who hails from Jersey) wanted a song<br />
which would pay his respects to the city<br />
which he now calls home.<br />
The lyrics were written and accepted within<br />
an thirty minutes one sunny workday afternoon.<br />
Some tweaking was required to fit<br />
words to music, however, the final song was<br />
what a song about a city should be, historical,<br />
harmonious and a reflection of the<br />
heart. Joe put music to the words which far<br />
outweighed the music in my head to which I<br />
wrote the lyrics.<br />
Since that day I have written over eighty<br />
song lyrics for Joe, although due to his work<br />
and family commitments most remain only<br />
words on paper. Therefore, should any budding<br />
musician wish to have lyrics to put to<br />
music you are more than welcome. Most<br />
lyrics I can relay the thought of the music<br />
(humming or worse my singing voice), as<br />
with The River City, with which I wrote the<br />
lyrics.<br />
leonardsx4@hotmail.com<br />
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Music For The H<br />
A New Platform For Musician<br />
Iset up Music for The Head and Heart – www.musicfortheheadandheart.buzz<br />
as a platform, as a collective<br />
voice for artists and performers who have a<br />
love of music. The purpose of Music for The Head and<br />
Heart brings together lovers of music from all over the<br />
world to share ideas and engage in collective music<br />
exploration and collaboration.<br />
There are different ingredients in this platform –<br />
Artist Video<br />
Artists are invited to the platform to talk about their<br />
love of music, experiences and creative process. This<br />
is done in a very relaxed manner and we film a series<br />
of short video clips of discussion followed by a musical<br />
performance. Those appearing on the platform can<br />
then invite another artist to appear on MHH. These<br />
videos are rolled out in blocks each year and showcase<br />
a wonderful variety of creative expression, ie<br />
“Music for The Head and Heart”. We already have 20<br />
artists recorded for the platform from all over the<br />
globe from all different musical styles. These include<br />
seasoned award-winning songwriters to up and coming<br />
new artists.<br />
Articles<br />
All videos on the main site are transcribed into articles,<br />
and the site also features articles on different<br />
aspects of musical creation and the “music business”.<br />
We also welcome articles to inspire, provoke and create<br />
musical discussion. The purpose of MHH is to<br />
share the collective love of music and how different<br />
music can connect us in different ways. This also<br />
means musical education and reflections on how<br />
music can be used as a powerful tool to show how<br />
connected we all truly are on this planet<br />
Live MHH Performances and the launch in Leeds Oct<br />
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Nick Cody<br />
ead And Heart<br />
s For Those Who Love Music<br />
26th 2019<br />
Throughout the year there will be MHH live performances<br />
from artists who have been featured on the<br />
site. There will be a strong theme of collaboration<br />
between artists which helps in making MHH a truly<br />
unique platform. The musical platforms allow for new<br />
ways of expression between artists, and showcase<br />
how music can bring us together and create a collective<br />
voice that inspires and provokes new ways of<br />
thinking and feeling. MHH is constantly developing<br />
and evolving to give voice to all those artists and listeners<br />
who love music<br />
The platform will launch on October 26th at<br />
The Heart Arts Centre in Leeds<br />
Shire Oak Hall<br />
Bennett Road<br />
Leeds, LS6 3HN<br />
United Kingdom<br />
The artists performing original material will be<br />
• Miranda Arieh<br />
• The Captain of the Lost Waves<br />
• Emily Mercer<br />
• Belha Hutchinson<br />
Tickets are just £6.00 for the whole evening -<br />
https://www.heartcentre.org.uk/event/launch-eveningfor-music-for-the-head-and-heart/<br />
Regards<br />
Nick Cody<br />
Founder of Music for The Head and Heart<br />
www.musicfortheheadandheart.buzz<br />
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Did You Find Jesus In Nashville?<br />
Did You Find Jesus In<br />
Nashville?<br />
verse one<br />
Did You Wonder down the highway,<br />
amongst darkness and despair?<br />
Thinking there was no one to light a<br />
lamp for you there.<br />
You looked in that whiskey bottle, did it<br />
make you so blind?<br />
When you reach rock bottom it's really<br />
hard to find.<br />
Chorus<br />
Amongst the music and the honky<br />
tonks<br />
Did you roll to the bottom of the hill?<br />
Or did you find the sunshine,<br />
And find Jesus in Nashville?<br />
(C)Murielle<br />
Nicolas<br />
Verse two<br />
Did you find some kindness and laughter<br />
on your way?<br />
Or were you spurned by others almost<br />
everyday?<br />
Did you pick up the old bible, you found<br />
dusty on the shelf<br />
Make something of what was missing<br />
from yourself?<br />
Chorus<br />
Did you find the church tat fed ya in the<br />
town<br />
Who made you feel good about yourself,<br />
pick you up when your down?<br />
Did you go to the church where the<br />
cowboys go?<br />
Or Baptist or Nazarine there are much<br />
more you know.<br />
Chorus x2<br />
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Dina Andrews<br />
DINA ANDREWS - THE PINK COW-<br />
GIRL - BIOGRAPHY<br />
Dina Andrews, aka ‘The Pink Cowgirl’ is a country<br />
& folk singer/songwriter from Jersey in the<br />
Channel Islands, who also presents country<br />
music radio shows for 2 digital radio stations.<br />
Her early influences include Kris Kristofferson,<br />
Gordon Lightfoot, Randy Travis and more<br />
recently, modern artists - among them Brad<br />
Paisley & Alison Krauss, among others. Her<br />
own voice and style have been likened to the<br />
late Kirsty MacColl. Dina started playing violin at<br />
age 7, discovered guitar aged 10, has been<br />
playing ever since and began writing her own<br />
songs 8 years ago, after studying & gaining a<br />
degree in English literature (and writing & publishing<br />
3 novels). Her songs soon began to be<br />
noticed and some were recorded & released by<br />
‘Paramount Song’ in Nashville, either sung by<br />
Dina or by various other female or male vocalists.<br />
She has performed many times in the<br />
Channel Isles and has played several live sessions<br />
on BBC Radio Jersey..... Here’s an example;<br />
https://www.bbc.co.uk/sounds/play/p04m68mv<br />
She is a constant supporter of several local<br />
charities and has organised & performed at<br />
many fundraising shows, as well as donating all<br />
proceeds from her 1st single release to ‘The<br />
Jersey Brain Tumour Charity’. Here are a couple<br />
of shows she did recently; Peas & Glove - An<br />
amazing charity supporting a young Jersey lad<br />
who had a terrible accident.https://www.facebook.com/peasandglove/photos/a.16078765194<br />
98097/23372176165639 80/?type=3&theater<br />
‘The Jersey Brain Tumour Charity’ - Dina set up<br />
a big charity event with some musician friends &<br />
raised much-needed cash for this fantastic<br />
charity.https://www.facebook.com/jerseybraintumour/photos/a.1411989979022155/2263205537<br />
2 33924/?type=3&theater All proceeds from her<br />
debut single ‘Tombstone Tarnia’ were donated<br />
to ‘J.B.T.C.’ Under the pseudonym ‘The Jersey<br />
Cowgirl’ Dina has a country music radio show<br />
going out at least 3 times weekly on ‘Irish<br />
Country Radio’<br />
https://www.irishcountryradio.net/presenters<br />
https://www.irishcountryradio.net/schedule Dina<br />
also presents a one-hour weekly DJ slot as ‘The<br />
Pink Cowgirl’ on Wigan based country music<br />
digital radio show ‘Red Rose Country’.... available<br />
every Sunday on ‘Mixcloud’.<br />
As well as co-writing with several US country<br />
singers, Dina’s own songs are being picked up &<br />
recorded by established US country artists<br />
(more news soon!). Her first album<br />
‘Complicated’ was produced by Sam Falle and<br />
recorded in Nashville, Tennessee in 2017 &<br />
2018, partly in The Zac Brown Band’s ‘Southern<br />
Ground Nashville’ studio & partly in Sam’s own<br />
Nashville studio. While in Nashville for recording,<br />
Dina played live at the legendary ‘Tootsies’<br />
and ‘Swinging Doors Saloon’.<br />
The album ‘Complicated’ released in September<br />
2018, is now on general release and currently<br />
being played by country radio DJs worldwide<br />
and Dina has 2 singles being released soon,<br />
‘Love’s Table’ and ‘My Christmas Angel’.<br />
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L4BXqWYqg<br />
_w<br />
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wiY_NminL5<br />
g These songs are available for download now<br />
on all of the usual digital outlets.<br />
UK Country Radio recently dedicated a page on<br />
their website to ‘Dina Andrews’ : http://ukcountryradio.com/artist-detail.php?artist_id=297<br />
and<br />
featured her ‘Complicated’ album for a week on<br />
the radio show. She has won three Nashville<br />
Directors Awards for songs she entered for the<br />
‘Nashville Songwriters Competition’ Those<br />
songs Are : "Let The desert Wind Blow",<br />
"Always Loved the Spring" and "Sycamore Tree<br />
(not recorded as yet!)" and is currently finalising<br />
a new song ‘The Chosen Few’, inspired by<br />
WWI’s Armistice Day and writing for a new<br />
album to be recorded & released in 2019. Early<br />
in 2019, Dina was nominated for the<br />
‘International Singer-Songwriters Association’<br />
‘International Female Songwriter Of The Year’<br />
award. She made it to the finals and is looking<br />
forward to the awards ceremony, which will be<br />
held in Atlanta, Georgia in <strong>August</strong>. https://issasongwriters.com/international-finalists/<br />
https://issasongwriters.com/2019-awards-show/<br />
Dina is now the official I.S.S.A. representative<br />
for the Channel Islands in the UK. Contact:<br />
Website: https://thepinkjerseycowgirl.com/<br />
Email: pinkjerseycowgirl@gmail.com<br />
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/thepinkjerseycowgirl/<br />
Youtube:https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC0r<br />
AEPwwoHXYkf4bvArti0A/videos<br />
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